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Oneshot The Tangled Web by Nomad1 - K+

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Amerision, Jun 1, 2006.

4.2307691574097/5, 13 votes
  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Jun 1, 2006 #1
    Title: The Tangled Web
    Author: Nomad1
    Rating: K+
    Pairing: None
    Words: 1,623
    Updated: January 2, 2004
    Published: January 1, 2004
    Status: Completed/One-Shot

    Summary: Oh the tangled webs we weave, when we practise to deceive...

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1667176/1/

    It's a MasterPuppeteer!Dumbledore Oneshot story to the max.

    A nice, short read.


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  2. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jun 1, 2006 #2
    Wow. That is a very good fic. It's good to see a manipulating Dumbledore that doesn't have him being found out at the end, even if it is only a one-shot.
    Aekiel
     
  3. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Jun 1, 2006 #3
    This is cool.
     
  4. digitalstorm

    digitalstorm Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Jun 3, 2006 #4
    What a wonderful Oneshot. Simply amazing.
     
  5. razz

    razz Seventh Year

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    Jun 5, 2006 #5
    Beautifully written ... very powerful. haha
     
  6. Athenia

    Athenia Groundskeeper

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    Jun 5, 2006 #6
    This is excellent.
     
  7. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Aug 9, 2009 #7
    This is one of the best oneshots I've read. It's really more of a drabble, I guess, than a true oneshot, but the writing and characterization of Dumbledore are top notch.

    Awesome stuff. 5/5
     
  8. Jeram

    Jeram Elder of Zion ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Sep 7, 2009 #8
    This was pretty well-written, if a bit short. I think it wouldn't be nearly as good without the short length - any longer, and you risk becoming tiresome.

    A truly interesting idea for a manipulative puppetmaster - unlike most.

    4/5
     
  9. hgf

    hgf Fourth Year

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    Sep 12, 2009 #9
    This was brilliant. I was completely taken in by this oneshot.

    Definitely 5/5
     
  10. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Sep 12, 2009 #10
    This definitely gets a 5/5 from me as well. Extra points for weathering the last 5 years, tbh.
     
  11. Ash'Ura

    Ash'Ura Totally Sirius

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    Apr 28, 2010 #11
    An excellent one-shot, 5/5. The Dumbledore of this fic really reminded me of Father from FMA (Manga), which I appreciate.