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The Volleyball Tournament (M)

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by ZeroTheDestroyer, Aug 3, 2009.

1.3333333730698/5, 3 votes
  1. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    Aug 3, 2009 #1
    Title: The Volleyball Tournament (M)
    Author: Keita And Kitty
    Rating: M
    Genre: Humor/General
    DLP Category: Naruto
    Pairing: Naruto/?
    Status: WIP
    Summary: All the females compete in a volleyball contest on the beach with everyone watching, the prize? why a bathing suit made of spakling jewelery & Sasuke of course. Watch them compete in two man teams, Rated M, Nudity, sexual, lemons, cursing,read more inside

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5118268/1/

    No idea what to make of this. It is like some funny smut fic. Thought I would put it out for review.
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    Last edited: Aug 3, 2009
  2. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    Aug 6, 2009 #2
    As smut it's boring, as humor it's not that funny. Granted I only read three chapters, but it didn't really interest me in the least.

    2/5.
     
  3. Zarent

    Zarent Seventh Year

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    Aug 6, 2009 #3
    Bad. Very bad bad bad. 1/5.
     
  4. Snarf

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    Aug 6, 2009 #4
    I swear to god, Zero, do you just sit around and fap all day to anime smut? Whenever I see a post by you, it's either praising all things harem or ... well, that's about it.
     
  5. Krogan

    Krogan Alien in a Hat ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Aug 6, 2009 #5
    Read the fic his sig links to, go ahead.
     
  6. Snarf

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    Aug 6, 2009 #6
    MILF story for the win, actually. I massive lol'd.

    But still, it just proves my point. Zero, you're a fucking perv. :D Good work.
     
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