The Way of the Warrior by Cubster - M

Leibhaftige Finsternis · Jul 29, 2006

Title: The Way of the Warrior
Author: Cubster
Rating: M
Genre: Alternates
Pairing: Harry/Katie
Status: WIP
Summary: Before HBP HPKing Arthur Xover. Tristan never died, Merlin sent him forward in time so that Dumbledore could have him help train Harry in the ways of the knight. HarryKatieBell

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3070158/1/

This is pretty interesting idea. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors, but to tell the truth, I am not very picky, and since I am a horrible judge of true quality , I will leave the job in more capable hands, namely all of the crazy people who post on this forum.

madeyemoody · Jul 29, 2006

but he was sure if he was not in this condition he would look much different. Harry’s whole face was bruised and beaten and skin was missing on one side of his face. His eyes were swollen shut and his hair was matted to his head with dried blood. His upper body had scars all over it and Dumbledore and Tristan could make out the word Freak carved into his chest. His whole chest and stomach were burned black his shirt melted and charred to his skin. His left arm was snapped in two, the bone was sticking out through the skin and many of the fingers were as well. His right arm was not as bad but still broken at the forearm and it looked as if the right collarbone was broken.
His lower half they could not tell, his pants were bloody and his right leg stuck out at an odd angle but that is all that they could see. Harry thankfully was breathing but not a lot and it was raspy and it sounded as if he were gurgling as well, which meant the blood was in his throat.
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I hate abuse strike 1

though dursley gets his arm cut off so meh

AN: The HarryKatie ship will be progressing than the TristanTonks ship will. Ron bashing will be found in this fic but not too harsh. I’ve always hated Ginny so if you don’t like Ginny bashing sorry. I read a lot of fics and I don’t read nearly enough where Ginny is bashed
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that is a plus strike -1

“Are you going to train to kill?” She wavered in the sentence; she did not want her best friend she had to become a cold blooded killer.
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everybody angsting about harry learning to kill strike 2

So it's average for a crossover I'll give it my judgement in few more chapters

madeyemoody

Leibhaftige Finsternis · Jul 29, 2006

Damn... I started to put another post and lost what I was going to put somewhere inside my mind. Hopefully it was stupid or not put into my mental shredder.

Myst · Jul 30, 2006

I personally didn't like it, Yet I enjoyed the movie.

Seemed poorly written, the romance was easily played with the Hand of God Syndrome and I noticed a few misspelling and things proof-reading would catch.

Not reccomended.

Dragon Watcher · Jul 30, 2006

I'll reserve comment for a few chapters but, the idea isn't that bad and I've never seen this type of crossover without total revamp of background information.

Niffler Lord · Jul 30, 2006

I donno. Its not all that captivating. 3/5

And for Gods sake! Its LAY in bed. I am getting so sick and tired of seeing "he lied in bed".

Lay - To cause to lie down
Lied - To present false information with the intention of deceiving

You lay on a hammock after you lied about jacking off the horse.

madeyemoody · Jul 30, 2006

Niffler Lord said:

I donno. Its not all that captivating. 3/5

And for Gods sake! Its LAY in bed. I am getting so sick and tired of seeing "he lied in bed".

Lay - To cause to lie down
Lied - To present false information with the intention of deceiving

You lay on a hammock after you lied about jacking off the horse:banana: .
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:lol: :lol: :lol: hahahahahahahahahaha

Lord Ravenclaw · Jul 31, 2006

It's not too bad of a story, though a few things really pissed me off, such as Tristan just taking to the magical world like a fish to water, Harry's instaship with Katie (little more build up, please?), and using the excuse of Tristan being a muggle and having Fudge threaten Obliviation just to get Harry as Tristan's son. With that said, it's not too horrible. 3.5/5

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