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Oneshot The Widower Maker by Draco664 - M (One Shot)

Discussion in 'Humor' started by Jearom, Aug 24, 2008.

  1. Eidolonic

    Eidolonic Supreme Mugwump

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    I enjoyed it. Leaving the responses up to imagination is more amusing than simply giving us the lines.

    4.5/5.
     
  2. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Meh, I really tried reading it. But the style it was written in irks me. It was amusing for a while, but then the way it was written gobbled up the humor and spit out annoyance. I had to force myself to get to the half way mark. I didn't make it further.
     
  3. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    It was decent, a tad funny, but not really all that good.

    3/5
     
  4. Magus

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    Pretty amusing, it passed the 5 laughs I need to enjoy a humour fic.

    A novel new twist on the "marriage law" theme.

    4.5/5.
     
  5. Korisovra

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    4.5/5 Amusing enough, a bit of originality, even if the style irritated me until I got into the flow. Library-worthy, IMHO.
     
  6. Hawthorne

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    Meh. The plot has been done before with other characters. I remember Hermione killing a row of Death Eaters in the same kind of setup. The humor is the kind where the author is trying to hard, and although it was mildly amusing it's nothing worth remembering. 3/5 because I read it all the way through. Might be worth a read if you are really desperate for entertainment.
     
  7. Militis

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    That was a great story. Imagining what was being said and done was more fun that being told what was being said and done. 4/5
     
  8. Beonid

    Beonid Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Reasonably funny the first time, and well written, even if was hard to get into.

    3/5
     
    Last edited: Sep 2, 2008
  9. Clerith

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    I liked it alot - rapist!Harry ftw ^^ 4/5
     
  10. Charmed Writing

    Charmed Writing Third Year DLP Supporter

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    Interesting plot, sort of boring. Ha.
    *has been away from DLP for too long*
     
  11. Warlocke

    Warlocke Fourth Champion

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    Er, did you read the right story? Harry was basically married to all of those women against his will. If anyone was being raped, it was him. As it stands, his 'beloved' wives all managed to have some rather serious accidents.

    Well, the ones that weren't sexed to death. Still, they were literally asking for it. When did he rape anyone? :confused:
     
    Last edited: Sep 13, 2008
  12. peregrine1989

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    I found it good, but the style it was written in annoyed me. I would have love to have the other side of the conversation. Other then that it was a good story. I can't comment on the originality of the story as I usually refuse to read Marriage Law stories.

    3/5 I have read better and its only just worthy of DLP.
     
  13. Wildfeather

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    Is the validation e-mail for the site this is hosted on working? I've had them send it to my e-mail several times, and I haven't gotten it yet. Didn't appear in my inbox or spam.
     
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