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To Rebel Against Fate by veraklon - NC17

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Moloch, Nov 2, 2006.

2.6666667461395/5, 6 votes
  1. Moloch

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    Nov 2, 2006 #1
    Title: To Rebel Against Fate
    Author: veraklon
    Rating: NC-17
    Genre: Erotica/Drama
    Pairing: H/L, H/Narcissa, H/Bella so far.
    Status: Work in progress
    Link: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=29985

    Summary: Betrayed in every way immaginable in his own time, Harry decides to eliminate the possibility of the Prophecy to ever occur, with no consideration for the ramifications of what he must do to create a world that he wants for himself.

    Starts with smut at the very beginning. Pretty interesting storyline too. I'll definately be keeping an eye on this.

    EDIT: Sorry. COuld have sworn I added the link though. >_<
     
    Last edited: Nov 2, 2006
  2. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    Nov 2, 2006 #2
    Where is the link?

    Will edit this post when I receive it.

    Eh, it's okay. It's just the beginning so I don't really know what to think. As it is just smut, I'm not going to rate a story on if it made me teh horny or not. I'll wait till there is some actual content, until I give it a proper review.
     
    Last edited: Nov 3, 2006
  3. Xiph0

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    Nov 2, 2006 #3
    The author said in the A/N that they were trying to mix it up and do something new, but honestly, that's some seriously sappy shit.

    *breaks out box of shit-to-be-burned-with-petrol and spots the 10 cent romance novels. Looks back up at the screen pointedly.*

    +1 Kink. ;)

    This could easily be stripped down a bit and turned into a -still- shitty (heavy emphasis on the quotes here) "Original" fic.

    Everything is Muggle. There is no originality here at all, and the author fails to deliver anything but mellow kink.

    If you want to write original smut, use magic for more than cleaning charms & lube ffs, or quit claiming it.

    1/5
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

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    It's my understanding that this isnt supposed to be all about smut. It's a proper story and this was posted to show people what to expect later.

    That said, it is fairly unoriginal. I still didnt mind it, though. It's been on my FicWad favorites list for awhile so I can keep an eye on it.
     
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    Ah alright. I'll try and get through the beginning later, or just skip it.
     
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    I liked it. Yes, it was cliché, but veraklon doesn't do a half-bad job.

    What isn't cliché these days?

    3/5
     
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    Shouldn't the question be, "Shouldn't we encourage those who are original and slam those who aren't?". Maybe it's just me, I dunno.
     
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