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To Rise from the Ashes by Lucullus - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by BlackPhoenix, Jul 24, 2005.

  1. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    Title: To Rise from the Ashes
    Author: Lucullus
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/adventure/general
    Pairing: Unknown
    Summary: Tom Marvolo Riddle had suffered during his childhood. Guess where that led him? What if Harry was not so tolerant of his relatives; what if Harry made a mistake when he was younger; a mistake which would invariably set the path he would walk in future? What if the path had been one attempted by Tom Riddle before? Harry might not have turned out the iconic Golden Boy he is now. He may be something far more darker. An AU take with Harry in Durmstrang. Eventual Dark!Harry and Independent!Harry.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2440104/1/
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Harry at Durmstrang is a different idea. Never read one like that so far so this sounds interesting. I hope its as good as it sounds.
     
  3. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    I have read all the chapters that have been posted so far and it seems very promising.
     
  4. Vecna

    Vecna Fourth Year

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    Good start, I like how its unique with how its going.
     
  5. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    i didnt really like it for some reason...

    NOT that im saying its a bad story, cuz it is very promising...

    just didnt catch my attention
     
  6. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    yes it is interesting and unqiue but I perfer his TRaFoHP( see Evil Harry) But I'll still be following this one
     
  7. nightangel960

    nightangel960 Fifth Year

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    unfortunately I agree with Vash.. this story .. I dunno I'm not feeling it
     
  8. True Story

    True Story Third Year

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    Whatever happened to this guy? He just dropped off the face of the earth or something....
     
  9. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Yeah. I was looking forward to more but like you said, he's dropped off the face of the Earth.
     
  10. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    So far my only real peeve is that the author gives Kakaroff an accent that he does not have in the books and have told the author just that. Other than that I like the story but am concerned for its future but I am not sure why.
     
  11. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    I liked it a lot. I hope the autor doesn't abandon this halfway through. It could really do well.
     
  12. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    I took a glance at it a while back and decided against wasting my time on it.

    Any story with ~10,000 words posted in one week and then no word from the author in almost six months is abandoned in my book.
     
  13. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    It's a shame really.
     
  14. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    This one had potential once, but doesn't really belong in the library anymore. It's only 9k words and has been abandoned for four years.

    The premise is that 10-year-old Harry is exiled from Britain after accidentally killing someone with magic. Dumbledore fights for him, but it's decided that he will attend Durmstrang instead of Hogwarts. Karkaroff picks him up, Harry arrives in Bulgaria and meets another professor, and that's it.

    2/5
     
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