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Traitors Within Discussion Thread - Old Story Thread

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Midknight, May 4, 2005.

  1. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    And enslave the House Elves, forcing them to make potion bomb and poisoned cookies for the kids in Harry's Workshop. Well...enslave them worse than they already are.
     
  2. ChuckDaTruck

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    I hope you update soon.


    :D
     
  3. ChuckDaTruck

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    Is Ginny going to ever get to fuck Harry? I can't imagine Harry wanting that, but it may be the only way to get Ginny's loyalty.,
     
  4. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    No, but I do have a very funny scene coming up that is similar to that.

    er I can't explain more, but it's funny as hell
     
  5. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Groovy. Post a teaser or something. Give us an Update.
     
  6. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    check the main story thread, heh you got your own teaser for a chapter not too distant.
     
  7. ChuckDaTruck

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    BRILLIANT!!!

    The bit with Mrs. Weasley was ESPECIALLY fantastic. FINALLY, someone find's a way to SHUT that BITCH UP!!! :twisted:


    Man, I am SO pumped for the next chapter now. :twisted: :twisted: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink:
     
  8. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    The whole bit with him manipulating Ginny causes his falling out with Ron, some stuff happens, and thats when he gets into it with Molly, asking her if he has to knock Ginny up to prove he's not a child anymore, and Ginny will be standing in the back acting all "omfg he luvs me!1!! I'll do anything for him!"

    That girl is gonna get so mind fucked, lol.
     
  9. ChuckDaTruck

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    YES!!! :twisted: :D :twisted:
     
  10. IndoGhost

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    i cant wait for it to come out.
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

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    Should have a scene were Harry is cleaning himself after a session with Ginny, using rediculous amounts of soap. Getting the 'germs' off his body. Haha.
     
  12. Perfect Insanity

    Perfect Insanity First Year

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    excellent work. im a fan. this one is particularly good because it allows for plot development, and character development. i must say, i feel like an ass posting these late ass reviews. in my defense, i only just recently discovered the site.
     
  13. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Re: fan

    Perfectly understandable =)

    With my work load lately, lol any review that isn't UPDATE BITCH, is greatly appreciated.
     
  14. Perfect Insanity

    Perfect Insanity First Year

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    yup

    i only wish my lit proffesor had that mental ideology. i wouldnt be getting a C. stupid fucking prat he is.
     
  15. Vecna

    Vecna Fourth Year

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    Re: fan

    :D :!:
     
  16. Perfect Insanity

    Perfect Insanity First Year

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    gin sucks

    ahhhhhhhh i just finished the last chapter. ginny bashing, mm mmm mmm.
     
  17. Anonymous

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    Post your story "Insanity" and Midknight, speaking of updates.... :D :wink:
     
  18. Perfect Insanity

    Perfect Insanity First Year

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    i meant of his story. im an awful writer. i started it only just yesterday. i read that whole, ginny your a stupid bitch just like your mom, thing
     
  19. Lord Osiris

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    Burn Weasley burn! MWAHAHAHA this is deffinately my top read! but wheres the update at!? meh ready and waiting though!
     
  20. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    i've got a good bit of the next chapter, I think I've already posted the teaser for it here, but I've been away at relatives house doing stuff the past 3 weeks (renovations) then I get to help some people with various out of work... work related things. When the weather out here starts to suck is when I actually have writing time =(
     
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