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Traitors Within Discussion Thread - Old Story Thread

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Midknight, May 4, 2005.

  1. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    lol @ Mid's sig.

    Whore Ginny trying to woo animangus Harry squirel!
     
  2. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    FUCK GINNY!!!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:


    MIDKNIGHT!! UPDATE SOON!!! :( :(

    :wink: :wink: :wink:
     
  3. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I agree, i'm dying to find out what's going to happen. I'll have to read the chapters again so I can remember everything.
     
  4. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    please update, please
     
  5. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    yeah =(

    I'm looking for a beta soon to bounce ideas off of I think, i've just been home so little lately, I couldn't even log on to check the bards the past 2 days @ work, much less @ home. Hell i'm @ work now damnit =/
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Bounce ideas off me anytime, i'm willing to put in my 2 cents.
     
  7. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I'll be able to help out occasionally.

    PLEASE UPDATE!! :( :(
     
  8. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Ah finally home. I've got 3 days off, so I'll toss some up this weekened.

    Due to the godamned gas deal, they're talking about making us do 4 12's .... god just freaking )*&^@*&^*&@ bah n/m
     
  9. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    YES!!!
     
  10. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Ive got to reinstall Xfire and Aim but ill be avalible after 4pm central time if ya like to throw things at me.... <_< im always on the damn compy as ive got little energy for doing anything else after dealing with that fucking bastard Ali ...

    God i hate that man... i think i hate him enough that i would even subject him to participating in Dumbledore's office orgy
     
  11. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    ^ Should give Giovanni a description of said person and Giovanni will gladly write him into the Office Orgy.

     
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    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    nah.. cant do that... then id seem racist.. and im not... i hate all races equally..
     
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    ^ Can PM Giovanni with description... Giovanni wont look down on silly Vash as long as he hates every race the same... Including his own.
     
  14. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    UPDATE!!!


    PLEASE!!! I'M DESPERATE!!
     
  15. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    did you read my locked topic in work by author that has the next 5Kish words. I've hit a writer block rewriting a few things and have been stuck for a bit now.
     
  16. ChuckDaTruck

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    no where is it
     
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    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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  18. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    lol didn't realize I had posted the story first here I take it?

    It was all the original content I removed, along with another 50 or 60 replies to trim it down once I locked it for the revised content. Now that I'm up to date here I'll probably post the new stuff here first, then follow it to ff.net later if i don't see glaring plotholes or something.

    At around 6500 views total, they hold the record for views for one story on this site, and I think my threads individually hold the records for views in the #1 and #2 spots anywhere or single threads, INCLUDING games! I locked my main story thread for the simple fact I didn't want it OT and like I said I deleted a good number of replies, lol.

    That's damned impressive, considering how on topic my 2 threads have stayed, compared to other high count threads that talk about everything but the story.
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

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    Brilliant!

    My question is why does Harry trust Kingsley and Tonks so quickly? How does he know that they ARE loyal to Dumbledore and were sent to spy on him? DUmbledore may be many things, but stupid he is not.


    ANyway, it was FANTASTIC!!! I LOVED seeing Ginny getting attacked and hurt. Hate that bitch.


    UPDATE SOON! :D
     
  20. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    He just assumes they are there for either the Ministry to arrest him, or for Dumbles to do something to him. When neither do anything, and both speak out against him, he relaxes his gaurd a bit. He's wary enough not to be off his gaurd and figures Lupin will help him if either tries to take him by force. What Kingsley says makes perfect sense to him, and is in fact the truth.

    Ginny was originally going to die in that scene, and Harry was going to leave her there in a pool of her own blood and go to another room to sleep, unaware she'd be bleeding to death, but since I cut a part out of the start of the story, and since I felt it didn't fit with Harry's attitude yet, I made her just get injured.

    There's very few things I hate in fanfiction more then cliches, and among the top of the cliche list is a slap happy Ginny. The bitch barely knows Harry, but for some reason all ff writers want to make her slap the spit out of him and turn into a ranting Mrs. Weasley. Thats the other thing I can't stand. The bitch did NOT spit Harry out of her womb, so she needs to keep her damned mouth shut.

    Alot of the writers let Harry be yelled at by everyone, and he just takes it. At 15, if someone yelled at me, I yelled back or acted on it, I didn't stand there like a punk and take it, it's unrealistic to make the guy a God, but turn him into a bitch everytime something with A-cups is yelling at him.
     
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