Hey guys, so I finally debuted as a director at a local film fest a while back and then uploaded the film to vimeo. I realized that this was another place to showcase it so follow the link if you're interested and let me know what you think.

https://vimeo.com/42153771

Just a warning, there is singing on it that is a bit louder, I never managed to turn it down before it was edited. Just a forewarning.

Also, yes that is me playing the spy, just to let you guys know.

 

As far as the look of the scene, it's pretty good. It could use a bit of a stronger camera angle, make the shadows crisper. They look strong, but you could make them stronger in post production. I think that the interrogator's voice and posture could be stronger, maybe give him a higher chair and the spy a stool.

You could also mock up a fake Propaganda poster, something to reinforce the idea of being held in a government bunker.

Second scene: maybe a scroll across blank or the same poster? nice transition tho.

Third: Still think you should be doing something to make the scale difference between the investigator and the person being questioned. Like the room is designed to make the other person seem smaller than they are.

Other thoughts forthcoming