1. DLP Flash Christmas Competition + Writing Marathon 2024!

    Competition topic: Magical New Year!

    Marathon goal? Crank out words!

    Check the marathon thread or competition thread for details.

    Dismiss Notice
  2. Hi there, Guest

    Only registered users can really experience what DLP has to offer. Many forums are only accessible if you have an account. Why don't you register?
    Dismiss Notice
  3. Introducing for your Perusing Pleasure

    New Thread Thursday
    +
    Shit Post Sunday

    READ ME
    Dismiss Notice

Complete Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure by JBern - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by jbern, Sep 1, 2007.

  1. slasheh

    slasheh Seventh Year

    Joined:
    Nov 9, 2006
    Messages:
    290
    even if i dislike her in many stories, that would be just tasteless. Cuddle ? Yes, fuck? no!
     
  2. Dethklok

    Dethklok Order Member

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2008
    Messages:
    839
    Location:
    The power of Christ compels him not to tell you.
    What can be said?

    Wizards, but British wizards in particular it seems, are quite lazy and unwilling to take personal responsibility for their lives.

    Why does Riddle want to rule over sheep? That question has never fully been answered. His little argument with Susan became a national sensation and is now a problem.

    Go figure.

    It really isn't Harry's responsibility to save everyone. Honestly, the contest between him and Riddle is a matter of survival. Harry might stick his neck out for Kwan, Luna, Bill, Hack, and that seems to be about it right now.

    Everyone else better step lightly and hope that they have positive karma points with Harry James Potter, because if they don't, he won't go out of his way for them.
     
    Last edited: Jun 25, 2008
  3. jbern

    jbern Alba Mater

    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2006
    Messages:
    1,100
    Location:
    Virginia
    TML 7 is off to final edits. Expect to see it within the next 24 hours. Now onto Lie 14.

    In other news, visit www.drabblecast.org to hear my first professional work as an audiocast. Reality Bites is Episode 70 of Drabblecast. I hope you enjoy it.
     
  4. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Feb 10, 2008
    Messages:
    992
    Location:
    Hawaii
    Just listened to it. A decent little story. It'd probably be more enjoyable in written form, for me at least, though.

    Not that the narration was bad or anything, I just prefer to read than listen.
     
  5. Banner

    Banner Dark Lady

    Joined:
    Nov 23, 2006
    Messages:
    1,672
    Location:
    Virginia, USA
    I have to figure out what's wrong with Quicktime, which means I have to wait 'til my husband gets home and relaxes the firewall.
     
  6. Nukular Winter

    Nukular Winter The Chosen One DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Jun 8, 2006
    Messages:
    2,216
    Location:
    Seattle
    Is that a euphemism?
     
  7. JoJo23

    JoJo23 Unspeakable

    Joined:
    Mar 22, 2008
    Messages:
    702
    What, he doesn't trust you with the admin password?
     
  8. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

    Joined:
    Jan 3, 2008
    Messages:
    6,193
    Location:
    Washington, D.C.
    Should we start posting kitchen pics in here too?
     
  9. Banner

    Banner Dark Lady

    Joined:
    Nov 23, 2006
    Messages:
    1,672
    Location:
    Virginia, USA
    He changes the password at least twice a month - upper+lower+number/symbol and at least 9 digits. For a while he had me doing it too, then I threatened to write my passwords on a piece of paper and tape it above my desk. He lightened up a bit after that.
     
  10. Dr. Strange Lulz

    Dr. Strange Lulz Denarii Host DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Dec 26, 2006
    Messages:
    1,192
    Location:
    On Melancholy Hill
    First off.

    Weird.

    Second... Where's the chapter? You make me sad...
     
  11. Immolo

    Immolo High Inquisitor

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2008
    Messages:
    574
    On the same line of thought any word from your betas?
     
  12. Alexeyy

    Alexeyy Seventh Year DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Nov 14, 2006
    Messages:
    239
    Location:
    Россия-Мать
    I'm going to be raped for playing on people's nerves, but... Too bad guys, he has not updated yet. I remembered a good pic just for the occasion.

    142.gif

    Edit: Speaking of which, has he updated yet?
    Damn it, no.
     
  13. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

    Joined:
    Jan 3, 2008
    Messages:
    6,193
    Location:
    Washington, D.C.
    Jesus y'all are gay. Just send him a fucking PM if you're that pressed.
     
  14. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

    Joined:
    Oct 28, 2006
    Messages:
    1,651
    Location:
    The Other Surrey
    Well that was an interesting Update.

    I've heard of Baba Yaga, but I forgot the details, anyone here willing to Tell DLP a bed time story?

    I'm a little disappointed that Dumbledore was able to brush it off... I wonder what dumbledore has planned for the little blood bag.

    Probably something not good...

    Luna's moodiness is starting to get irritating, though I'm warming up to Hermione now.
     
  15. jbern

    jbern Alba Mater

    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2006
    Messages:
    1,100
    Location:
    Virginia
    Just Wiki her and you'll get the gist.

    I was going to say that it's updated now, but I'm guessing people realize that now.

    Luna is a shy 15 year old who keeps herself distanced from anyone. She needs to grow up and Harry doesn't have the time to wait for her. He's got other problems.

    Back to Lie 14. I think I'm going to make my self imposed deadline.
     
  16. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

    Joined:
    Jun 24, 2006
    Messages:
    577
    Well one way to make Luna grow up would be to toss her in "the war",
    and if you did that, well I'm sure it would have a certain flair.

    I think Harry needs to find an action girl, but not many fan fic writers seem to agree with me, ah well....
     
  17. fuubar

    fuubar Headmaster

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2007
    Messages:
    1,101
    Another excellent update.

    It's nice to see how Hermione is changing her views on the world after being screwed so many times. The bit with Luna, while kind of annoying, is still fairly realistic in my opinion. Hmm, I've never heard of the Baba Yaga or any of the associated lore but Wikipedia can fix that without to much trouble.
     
  18. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

    Joined:
    Nov 8, 2005
    Messages:
    1,891
    Location:
    I lived in my mind but I lost my key.
    Utter and complete shit. I hated every second of it. Infact just quit writing. Quit no one cares. I have seen fics on mugglenet and ginnypotter that were better than that pile of steaming baluga shit.




    Now that thats out of the way. Excellent. Luna is a little girl trying to act big and tough. Harry has had sex with a few girls oh well. Harry grew up and Luna didnt.
     
    Last edited: Jun 28, 2008
  19. Vesvius

    Vesvius High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2007
    Messages:
    567
    A very good chapter. It had some good character development in the case of Hermione, Luna, and Dumbledore. Hermione shows a hint of the brain she was supposed to have, and Luna proves that she is still a Fifteen-Year Old Girl. And it's good to know that Dumbledore can take a bit of what he dishes out (It was done for the greater good). Though I did kinda expect Harry to use that line. "I made a bloodbag for the greater good. I named him Ralph for kicks."

    It's good to know that Lie 14 will be up soon. I've been very curious about it for a while, particularly since I noticed some rather disturbing similarities between Lie and Darkness.

    You mentioned a self-imposed deadline for Lie 14. Maybe I missed it, but when was that again?
     
  20. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Feb 10, 2008
    Messages:
    992
    Location:
    Hawaii
    The end of the month.
     
Loading...