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Oneshot Turncoat by Taure - T

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Taure, May 16, 2006.

  1. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Oops. Was I supposed to put comments in here?

    *scratches head nervously*

    Um...well...

    *copies and pastes*

    *moans...but not in a sexual way*

    This story has so much potential! Why a one-shot? Keep it going! Show Harry learning from Voldemort, being his right-hand man, becoming a Dark Lord and taking over the world!

    Oh well...it was excellent. It was original, well-written, exciting, and intruiging--everything that a good story needs. I commend you for creating such a great story, and thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading it.

    GREAT JOB TAURE!

    :D
     
  2. This_Ancientz_Dream

    This_Ancientz_Dream First Year

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    I thought I had read this one before and I was correct, but it deserves comment, none the less. It's a very good oneshot, but I really do wish it had been done as a full length fic.

    I love Harry in this one! Bravo!


    :forkyou
     
  3. Nexus

    Nexus Denarii Host

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    Loved it Taure. I really wish it wasnt a one-shot though.
     
  4. On April Third

    On April Third Squib

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    uh-maze-ing.

    was very exciting, plus the end was funny :D
     
  5. zenaku

    zenaku First Year

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    Stupid FF.net! I've been trying for the past couple of days to read the second chapter, but it keeps telling me that its not there!
    Anybody else having this problem?
    Gees, I'm an idiot. I never even bothered to read the first chapter over again. If I did, I would have noticed the update. Nope, i just kept clicking the link to the 'Second Chapter' that FF.net sent me...
     
    Last edited: Aug 11, 2006
  6. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Awesome. Just read chapter 1. DOnt know what that is all about ^.

    It was fantastic. I loved every bit of this. Im not going to whine about the lenght. everyone else has done that for me. It would be good to see Harry kill Voldemort and become the next Dark Lord. Muhahahahahaaaa
     
  7. LillyMagic

    LillyMagic Guest

    Really good one-shot

    Yes! Finally a great evil!Harry story. I enjoyed this a lot. I thought the way the author portrayed Harry was excellent (he was so evil!!! lol. I actually like Hermione but I just loved that ending). It would be even better if the story were longer, but it was still great.
     
  8. Leibhaftige Finsternis

    Leibhaftige Finsternis First Year

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    Well written. Decidedly evil. Appeals to my fractured mind. Strong Harry. Drives evil fluffy bunnies out of my thoughts. Evil Harry. Good story. Hope to see more than just a two-shot, but it is up to the author. Oh well.
     
  9. Annwn

    Annwn Squib

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    An interesting idea that was written well. I eagerly await the 2nd part.
     
  10. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    ..........................................How did I just find this now? Taure++

    6/5 ;)
     
  11. Klael

    Klael Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Not too shabby. i like the angle.
     
  12. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    The DLP.net version of this fic is still online, but the FF.net edition is gone. I have an old version (using the default de-FF.net-izer template in the archives, but I am unable to update it to the DLP.net template. Sorry.

    --bornagainpenguin

    PS: This is not necro, because I'm updating re: missing fic!
     
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  13. Nytmare

    Nytmare Fourth Year

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    Damn I was just going to say that was not really a Necro!

    you Are loosing your touch!
     
  14. Kinser

    Kinser Fourth Year

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    I think this is one best stories I've read. My only complaint is that it wasn't longer. I think that if it was expanded a bit it could be a novella length story at the very least.

    Over all its executio, was flawless.

    5/5
     
  15. Crazy Demon

    Crazy Demon Squib

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    Haha, I actually thought it was pretty funny. The whole lemon exploding trick is proof to me that the more evil you get, the more convoluted the plan becomes: after all, there's no guarantee that Dumbledore would have eaten the thing, especially since he constantly offers them to other people!
     
  16. Juggler

    Juggler Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Er, didn't really like it. Some of the elements haven't aged well, like Ginny using love potions, and Daphne being a Slytherin princess. Harry also couldnt've done many of the things he did in canon while being a Voldemort supporter. However, the idea is good (if flawed), and I didn't mind the ending very much. I would've enjoyed a last scene where Harry gets back to Voldemort and perhaps gets killed, but oh well.
     
  17. Taure

    Taure Magical Core Enthusiast Prestige DLP Supporter

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    Oh god, don't bring this back up. I tried to hide it for a reason, lol. I guess I wasn't thorough enough in my efforts to purge it from the internet.
     
  18. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    I think we all wish our old fics would disappear. I certainly do, anyway...
     
  19. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander Prestige DLP Supporter

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    Lies. Lies and blasphemy.


    No chance of an update? :3
     
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