Are you going to write this? And are you going for Harry to be a manipulator?

 

Yeah, he'll play the manipulator role.

 

Look, enough planning. Write this shit and post the first chapter already.

 

Hm, soon... soon. I'm going to have to change some stuff around and change around the plotlines. Though, I do have to figure out the experiment thing, and than figure out how/when is he going to be experimented.

 

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Look Cup, it takes a lot to write a fic. Don't just say, well enough planning write. If he wants to plan his fic, then you better wait. He is the author, not you. If he wants to take along time to write a fic as good as he can, with as much planning he can fit into his time, then he is. Also, it’s fan fiction. He does it because he is a fan, not a hardcore author. He actually has a life; he might not have time to write a story as fast as Cupspeaker wants. [/FONT]

 

God I hate first chapters! >.<

I've changed a few things around. Instead of returning for his fifth year, Harry would be returning for his fourth years since I think it'd be the best time to interact with students (Triwizard Tournament and Quiddicth World Cup and all). This is still going to be a HONKs story as well as a Manipulative!Harry without the pussyness and whatnot. I'm just have trouble starting the story.

Edit: The Horcruxes won't be added, just that Vold marked Harry, so he's going to resemble Tom to an extent. I don't know how to start the HONKs, might go with the bodyguard... but I'm just thinking with Manipulative!Harry it'd be a little... odd.