Title: Twisted Roses
Author: Lady Salazar
Pairing: HPLE
Rating: T
Words: 624
Published: January 9, 2006
Status: Complete/ONESHOT
Summary: Even though it means her death, Lily just can't let Harry go. Mild HP/LE
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2745133/1/

This was the first oneshot I read, and will always stay as my favorite.

Just give it chance.



Checked by Minion, March 4, 2013

 

It was okay, but it was a bit too short and it was not very satisfying compare to those good oneshot fics.
Average!

 

I agree. I would rather see it as a prologue of a longer fic then as a one-shot.
It's just to damn short and it really doesn't bring that much new to the table so to speak.

 

Its good but unsatisfying. This would make a great start to a story if the author continues. 3/5

 

It was an okay story but too short to get a pass in my book. If the author chooses to continue it'll be probably be worthwhile reading but not in it's current length.

 

For a oneshot, I would say that it's pretty good. 3/5. But if I were to rank it against any other multi-chaptered story of the same quality, it would be the trash bin for this story.

 

I read this story some time back and it seemed like it was going somewhere and it might have been better if the one-shot was a prologue to a continued story. I'll give it 3/5

 

I thought it was ok, very much a thing Lily would do. Harry going back in time, making Lily fall in love with him, fathering himself and letting Lily sacrifice herself so he could live was full of win. 3/5
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