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Unincorporated War-Dani Kollin

Discussion in 'Books and Anime Discussion' started by Johndoe022, Jul 6, 2011.

  1. Johndoe022

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    Hey Guys, do you ever read a story that grabs your attention and wont let go until you finish it? You only do it because it feels like your watching a car wreck and you can't turn away? Well at 3:20 this morning I have just finished the book Unincorporated War By Dani & Eyton Kollin ........god damn it.

    This book is the second in a three book series about a Billionaire Industrialist by the name of Justin Cord who is dying from cancer so he builds himself a suspension device and goes under and wakes up 300 years in the future. It's a twisted blend of sci-fi, romance and thriller that ..........and I don't have any positive things to say.

    I got to the point where I wanted to know what happens to his wife that I kept skipping chapters to find out what happens (It really, really pissed me off) it was like the Authors were saying yeah we know you bought our book and took time out to read it but here let me fuck with you a bit. Like when you read a story and they keep throwing shit at the characters just to show that they can so if any of this shit happened to any normal people in RL they would say something like ......this isn't worth it go to hell, improving society be damned. That describes this story to the hilt. I kept reading it hoping it would get better. I did it. I finished it and I wanted to punch someone in the face.

    The romance kind of caught my attention and that was the only reason I finished the first book and the subplot was him trying to win her love. So after the second book you find they married and she is lost on a raid. Then the main evil villain gets hold of her and brainwashed her, raped her and tries to decide if sending a video to her husband would be funny while also thinking of reversing the brainwashing effect and seeing if she goes insane for betraying her husband. WTF. I lost all interest in finishing this story. But, I had to finish. It was horrible. Don't read this book. Unless you are in a good mood and you want to piss yourself off.
     
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