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Dead Link Unreal Insanity by mysterywalker - Unreal Tournament - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Lord Ravenclaw, Nov 6, 2005.

3.5/5, 6 votes
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  1. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 6, 2005 #1
    Title: Unreal Insanity
    Author: mysterywalker
    Rating: M
    Crossover: Unreal Tournament
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary: AU: Brought up by two bloodthirsty, psychotic killing machines, Harry followed in their footsteps for fourteen years. Now Dumbledore, Sirius and Remus have found him, and they want him back.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2466980/1/

    Funny story, Harry is downright psychotic, and kills for fun. The story is decent, but a bit confusing in parts.


    Checked by Minion, Jan. 8, 2013
    Dead link is dead. If you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.
     
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  2. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    .....

    er... as someone who plays Unreal Tournament this story just sounds painful.

    Is it honestly worth reading? lol
     
  3. SoulesS

    SoulesS First Year

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    Nov 6, 2005 #3
    It is IMO until chapter 13 when he goes back to his time and meet a canon character and offers to train her to be powerful like him. That screw the fic for me, I can accept a sidekick or two but if you make those sidekicks equal to the main character is just wrong IMO.

    <Off Topic>
    My first post =) I hope you can understand my poor english.
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  4. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 6, 2005 #4
    Exactly, it was good until he went back in time.
     
  5. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 6, 2005 #5
    Can understand it just fine.

    Welcome and be sure to make your intro thread =)


    I'm glancing through the first chapter and it is indeed painful, but I'd be interested to see what happens when he gets to death eaters =)

    Any story that has a strong young Harry is usually just too hard for me to read though, you figure he got lucky the first few years in canon, reading a young, young Harry as a killing machine usually just doesn't work.
     
  6. SoulesS

    SoulesS First Year

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    Well I can understand that he has burst of power rarelly through canon (patronus err... thats it =p lol)but I can see him powerful or killing machine like if he were raised by people who can bring that "power" into play like in this fic.

    I must say that I'm a Gore!Whore so this fic is right for me ^^! so my opinion is a lil biased.

    Until next time...

    *Sorry for spelling or grammar mistakes*
     
  7. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I saw this awhile ago and when I saw the title and summary, I thought had found a real winner. I was nearly drooling at the mouth when I clicked it but then I found out it was a crossover, something I dont like that much but can tolerate, it dimmed my spirts a bit but then when I found out what it was crossed with... well, I just stared blankly at the screen for about five minutes wondering why the world is so cruel.
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 6, 2005 #8
    im ashamed to admit this...

    ive been reading it since chapter one... i like it for the most part... though it can suck at times... chapter13 for example..
     
  9. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I've read it all and I just can't stand it. Gore is one thing, but the story just pushes it a bit too far.

    Maybe if I hadn't played Unreal I'd like it, but it's too far from normal Harry Potter for me to stand it.
     
  10. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Harry Potter/Unreal Tourny Cross Over.

    The above is all you should need in order to know not to read it.
     
  11. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 6, 2005 #11
    Eh, I found it funny.
     
  12. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I did like the hyper active Sirius in the start of the story.
     
  13. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 7, 2005 #13
    Some parts were good, but I didn't like most of it.
     
  14. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    hmm it is written like Harry is insane which he probably is...

    i don't really know what to say about it. the psycho thing was good at first but if he's going all Lightside then i might just give it a bad rating...

    I am for the Dark and Evil! Harry...
     
  15. LT2000

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    Nov 19, 2005 #15
    If that's so, then you need to click on the GREEN link in my sig and read.

    Yes, that's an obligatory fic plug.
     
  16. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 20, 2005 #16
    O_O... SERA! ...you bastard.. no self promoting.... thats uhh.... against the rules!!


    errr... and if your into dark and evil ... might i suggest Lust of a dark soul in the dark arts section... its done by a WONDERFULLY brilliant author.. you just MUST read it...
     
  17. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    O_O...Vash! You bastard! No self promoting...thats against the errr rules!!

    And if you're into dark and evil...might I suggest my currently non-existant Dark!Harry story, but will be after I finish my first two...
     
  18. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 20, 2005 #18
    it might be.... but when have we ever cared for the rules....


    -__- .. and i suppose since its not avalible yet its not self-promotion... you got lucky this time ... i wouldnt want to have to do something evil to you...
     
  19. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    So how long must i lie in wait for this new story Lord Ravenclaw? you still owe us the next chapter for 'silvertongue' or was it for 'Era'? Yeh anyway come on man im almost salvating in wait!
     
  20. parselmaster

    parselmaster Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    Mar 24, 2006 #20
    I'm waiting as well but much more patiantly than most, as I understand that it can take awhile to write. My own written works just suck in my oppionion and FF.net just eats my formatting makes me :puke: .

    This Fic seems a bit gorey but I'll try it.
     
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