1. DLP Flash Christmas Competition + Writing Marathon 2024!

    Competition topic: Magical New Year!

    Marathon goal? Crank out words!

    Check the marathon thread or competition thread for details.

    Dismiss Notice
  2. Hi there, Guest

    Only registered users can really experience what DLP has to offer. Many forums are only accessible if you have an account. Why don't you register?
    Dismiss Notice
  3. Introducing for your Perusing Pleasure

    New Thread Thursday
    +
    Shit Post Sunday

    READ ME
    Dismiss Notice

WIP Veritas Oracle by BajaB - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by phoenix_rage, Nov 3, 2009.

  1. PapaMidNite56

    PapaMidNite56 Second Year DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Dec 3, 2007
    Messages:
    73
    Location:
    Louisiana
    I liked the premise of this story and I found it very amusing at first. Originally I would have given it a 4/5, but that last chapter turned serious and killed the mood a little bit. It was amusing the way Luna told them off but still.

    3/5
     
Loading...
Similar Threads
  1. Croaker
    Replies:
    18
    Views:
    10,647