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Oneshot Voices, by Surarrin [Jon] - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'Dresden Files' started by Jon, Mar 29, 2010.

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  1. Skeletaure

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    Apr 8, 2010 #21
    It was a nice little read, with only two issues.

    1. Why didn't Harry just shoot her, instead of using magic? The iron in the bullet would be more harmful to her than any of his spells.

    2. How was Annabel able to keep Harry there. He had made no deal with her, and so she should have had no power over him.

    Otherwise was good. Especially the Molly part at the end.
     
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