Title: Voldemorts' Heir
Author: Madeye
Rating: M
Genre: Action/Adventure
Summary: When Voldemort casts the killing curse he dosn't expect it to rebound, but when it does and he narrowly misses the bright green curse he has a decision to make. Voldemort kidnaps Harry Potter and raises him as his own son, Alexander Riddle

Link: http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=161310

 

its quite good actually

 

only thing is, harry is goin to turn on his daddy... and help bumblebore....

 

It kind of makes sense though in terms of this story... In other Voldemort adopts Harry stories I've read he usually ends up caring about Harry at the very least... In this he seems to treat him only a little better than a Death Eater.

 

What if he turns just to kill daddy and take over?

 

That would be good :twisted:

 

i like that idea. then he should kill bumblydore as well. and some mudbloods, gotta kill some of them

 

I don't know, I think enslaving the mudbloods works better, after all, you won't have to do the hard work on construction, you could work on a Colosseum for entertainment like in ancient times, there are so many possiblities that just killing them is a waste. Though if one does kill them be creative

 

yea i agree

 

I've read this fic before its pretty good.

 

This story started pretty good but as it was evolving it kinda become little bit cliché, I think that the transition from the dark side to the light side was pretty short.

Altought everything above, this fic it's pretty good.

Keep going

 

There is of course the fundamental flaw of logic in Voldemort, who aspires to immortality, adopting a heir. Then there is the pace being too fast, the nonexistent descriptions of settings ending before they begin, and errors sprawling across every other sentence. Not even normal unbetaed work is this sloppy.

To the author, whom I am fairly certain is a DLPer, abandoning this story was the best idea you had about it.
1/5.

Either deletion or removal from the library recommended.

 

this kind of crap always gets me to close the story before I even begin to read it...

You necroed the thread by a couple of years too.

Well, at least your post was not useless like mine =]

 

Off the thread topic post:

I think the only story which features Harry as Voldemort's heir and the whole thing has a purpose in it is in Reign of Power. Presented right and seemingly used with purpose, it wasn't really that well developed until the end though.

 

I really couldn't follow much of the logic behind this one. Don't really like it.

 

Why is this in here? What's DLPs policy on fics that were once entered in the Library? Do they get removed if their rating goes down? 'Cause this one has, and thoroughly deserves it.

That snippet alone shows the appalling grammar. "parcel tongue" - seriously?

This is just as a poor effort all round; everything happens too quickly. The switch from dark to light, for instance. I only glanced through the whole thing, but I could tell how unsuited for the Library this was. This would get a 1, 2 at best these days.

I thoroughly third Andromalius's and Oz's recommendations this gets removed from the Library.

1/5