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WIP Voldemort's Last Spell, by Louis IX - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Heleor, Apr 13, 2006.

  1. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    Title: Voldemort's Last Spell
    Author: Louis X
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Spiritual
    Pairing: H/Many. Trust me.
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary: Voldemort intended to kill the whole Potter family, but something unexpected happened. Now, the Dark Lord must face the result of a severely twisted Prophecy as well as a very old... thing. What history can Harry have after this? What history can he make?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2651376/1/

    Can't believe this one hasn't been posted. It's severely AU, and has a very rich background of history. 5 chapters, updates sporadically, but is long.

    Thread updated, story is back and updating. - Dark Syaoran, 26/06/2020
     
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  2. parselmaster

    parselmaster Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    Pretty interesting, nice history indeed and as you said serverely AU. I have a pretty open mind, though some things made me grit my teeth. Has some pretty well thought out origins though.
     
  3. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Golden Patronus Admin

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    I like it. Not really into the whole godlike scene but this is good.
     
  4. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I liked it alot, its new i'll give it that.
     
  5. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    It's really quite good, I'm following it. Though I have to say sometimes the point of view get's on my nerves.
     
  6. Scarty

    Scarty Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I enjoyed reading this, hope to see more from this stuff.
     
  7. John Croaker

    John Croaker Second Year

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    Like it.
     
  8. Xantam

    Xantam Denarii Host

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    Like it even if it is kind of mocking Christianity(which I follow). Still very good ideas.
     
  9. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    I like how Harry gets credit for stuff in history.

    I just read, and read, and read, looking for a plot, something definable to happen.

    Nothing does. It's like some endless story that has no point.

    Good ideas, annoying point of view, but this is waaay AU. H/Many doesn't mean much in this story anyway.
     
  10. BlueMagikMarker

    BlueMagikMarker Pirate King Yarrgh's First Mate

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    I've read through it, it was different. I didn't like how the author forced Harry into some of these historical characters. Most of them were okay... but making Harry get trapped by whats her name as Merlin after living for ...I don't even want to guess how many years, that was a little unrealistic... even by this fic's standards.

    That pretty much sums up what I feel about this fic.
    Sure its cool that Harry is all of these awesome historical figures... all at once, but how does that contribute to the plot?
     
  11. Gullible

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    It'll probably start when he gets back to his original time period. I mean, almost every HP fic is based around Voldemort, whether it be Harry joining him, or killing him, or even (shudder) loving him (gag). But because Voldemort isn't alive, the plot can't start.
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Golden Patronus Admin

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    I think the plot is that he pretty much created every major group of people on the planet, along with various legends, as well as being the person who brought magic into the world, even if he didnt mean too.

    The person in the first chapter that's walked in on Voldemort about to kill baby Harry is, in fact, Harry. Confusing, yes? I guess if Harry stops Voldemort from 'killing' baby Harry, then his older self will just... vanish, and the universe will collapse on its self... scary thought. Or something else will happen... who knows.

    I bet he is Slytherin or Gryffindor next... heh.
     
  13. BlueMagikMarker

    BlueMagikMarker Pirate King Yarrgh's First Mate

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    In this story, he could most likely be both of them and nobody would know the difference. That would actually be interesting to read, Harry having a historical spat with himself and running off like a baby whilst staying behind as well.
    Edit: I still wish I knew what the plot was though.
     
  14. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    It looks pretty good. I think i read it before and stopped...wonder why?
     
  15. The Sinner

    The Sinner Looked into the void

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    I like this very much. Its a new view on magic entirely.
     
  16. CGB

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    I think this is a really interesting story. I didn't like some of the things he wrote like the scene with Jesus for example but if you put these scenes aside it's good. Unrealistic but good nevertheless.
     
  17. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I got annoyed after the first two lines... Lily Evans - Potter... WTF?
     
  18. HiddenETC

    HiddenETC Second Year

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    What's so wrong about that? I mean, its just saying her maiden name and her last name after marriage. I'm confused, am I missing something?
     
  19. The Sinner

    The Sinner Looked into the void

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    That annoyed you? Its just the beginning afterall. Try reading the rest of the story. It is definetly a good read. God!Harry
     
  20. Sanctimonius

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    loved it... can't wait to see how it turns out. The god-like thing was a turn-oof at first, but it ends up showing harry as more of a jack of all trades instead of a master
     
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