This is normally a fairly well-written H/Hr, with pretty close to canon characters. However, the most recent chapter features Vernon punching Harry in the face in front of Dumbledore and Hermione's family. Not only does Dumbles not stop Vernon in any way, he stops Hermione's attempt to stop him. This isn't Independent/Dark Harry or Manipulative/Overly Negligent Dumbledore but yet he goes completely OOC after 150,000 words. Rubbed me the wrong way I guess...:?