Title: 'Vox of Vicis'
Author: Master Slytherin
Rating: M (NC-17)
Genre: General/Action/Adventure
Pairing: NOT SLASH. H/OC
Summary: Harry=a famous hollywood actor. His guardian=Paul Moon who ran away from the Grindlewald war. Dumbledore finds Harry when he is sixteen and convinces him via Paul to check out what Hogwart's is like. On the way to Hogwart's, something goes terribly wrong...
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2516451/1/


PLEASE REVIEW!

 

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Really? That's strange.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Freelancehero/files/

All the chapters I've written are here.

 

it's a good story but I don't like the fact that they just kidnapped him, The American Ministry has to say something about it. can you say international incident

 

Well crap. I wish this was still on ff.net, I could read it then. I hate having to side-scroll to read a story :x

 

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2 people think it's dreadful? :cry:

Oh well! 3 people think it's good which cancels it out and adds one! :twisted:

What do you think of it Voldemort? (though your technological expertise is welcome)

This is just a trial thing so I want constructive criticisms. What should I change?

 

How do I become a MEMBER so I can read it?


ARGGHHH! NO ONE APPRECIATES HOW DIFFICULT IT IS TO BE RETARDED! :x



You couldn't just post on Fanfiction could you :gives sweet, retarded, toothy smile:

 

Do you have a yahoo address?

If not, signing up is pretty easy and free.

If so, all you have to do, is visit:

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Then you become a member and everything is in the files section. Also, we're building links to the best fics on the net in the links section you may want to look into.

 

I've read up through chapter 4.

Anyway, this is a cool story, but I liked it more when Harry was at odds with Dumbledore.

I'm for you to update again though.

 

He is kinda at odds with Dumbledore and Dumbledore is 17 years old! A far cry from the manipulative Dumbledore we all know and hate.

 

It's a fun story. I didn't like that Harry's girlfriend and Uncle Paul both died so early, but I recognize that it was necessary to give him a real reason to fight against Voldemort. That was my major beef at the beginning. He had money, women, power, fame, everything in America and was far removed from the war, so I didn't see it any reason for him to risk his life for the sake of a bunch of people he didn't know or care about.

 

But that's the thing, no matter where you put Harry, he will always protect the people around him at the cost of anything. Yes, the death of his Uncle and Jen were VERY important. This fic isn't fun mate. It's pretty dark if you ask me but maybe I didn't pull it off well. Thanks for the review. [/i]

 

Oh, I think it's very good, but giving Harry some reason to fight was a hurdle that needed to be crossed and the deaths did that well. I liked Uncle Paul and especially Jen quite a bit. And the idea of him being a famous actor and none of the dipshit Order having a clue is classic.

 

Yeah, that was had me laughing. He literally has to get on stage in front of Dumbledick in order for the Headmaster to realize who he is.

 

I can't say I didn't enjoy writing that part. :wink:

 

You forgot the option 'Troll', nah story is good so far (I read it on FanFiction.net i.e. Chapter 2)

 

Your group isnt working for me =/ now i cant see chapters 3-4.