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What's the most disturbing thing from a story that's stuck with you over the years?

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Mickey, Mar 30, 2018.

  1. Mickey

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    I've been rereading The Lie I've Lived by jbern and I just came across the subplot of Sarah Underhill.

    For those of you unaware (and slight spoilers for the story) it involves Snape taking polyjuice to become Sirius Black, only for him to have sex with multiple female students and end up impregnating one.

    There is just something about him impersonating Sirius that's wrong on so many levels and really gets under my skin. Him having sex with Sirius' body for one, misleading the women into making them think he's Sirius for another, and something about the entire concept of him taking polyjuice to become someone he isn't for his own disgusting needs/desires is so sick to me.

    It really makes me think of the seedier parts of magic, and while there can be greater triumphs and achievements, there are also lower lows.

    So how about you guys? Is there anything from a story that just got under your skin in the worst way?
     
  2. 99redbloons

    99redbloons Third Year DLP Supporter DLP Bronze Supporter

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    Snape then also kills her and the unborn child while part of the Death Eaters. I can't think of any examples from fan fiction myself, but Tom Riddle Sr getting raped by Merope Gaunt in HBP was something quite disturbing that when I first read the book I didn't really pick up on.
     
  3. GreatRedDragon

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    Most of Prisoner's Cipher, especially the ending, to this day it's one of the best fics I've ever read.
     
  4. Harrylover

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    I read a fic where Ron knocks up Lily. God that made me almost vomit. Imagining Ron with Harry's mother made me vomit. If you have to ship Lily then ship her with Harry not fucking Ron Weasley. He doesn't deserve even Hermione never mind the hotness that is Lily. Same with shipping Ron with Daphne, Fleur etc. I don't think he even deserves Lavender.
     
  5. Psychotic Cat

    Psychotic Cat Death Eater

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    So I've been wondering, is it just the one guy that keeps creating accounts solely to talk about how much he hates Ron, or is this something multiple people do?
     
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    It's either Alexx or someone with the exact same opinions. Just ignore him.
     
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    This one-shot, First Place Sinner by Daystar Clarion.

    To briefly summarize, Vernon left Petunia way before Harry received his Hogwarts letter and he managed to gain custody of Dudley. Petunia is left with Harry and her life unravels... Shady boyfriends, drugs, etc. Just superbly written and fucked up.
     
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  8. Zombie

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    I feel like some of the post here missed the point of OP. The most fucked up fic I've ever read was where Harry fucks Hedwig because she can change into a human and while fucking her she turns back to an owl and explodes.
     
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    @Sorrows

    the fucking mpreg horrorfest, that shit smelled like Resident Evil 7 on steroids
     
  10. Zombie

    Zombie John Waynes Teeth Prestige DLP Supporter

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    That was pretty tame tbh compared to some of the shit I've read and seen.
     
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    I'm sure it is, but I haven't read that shit, so...

    I mean, it's hard to get a more subjective topic than this thread. Some horror movies that disturbed me deeply are popcorn affairs for others.
     
  12. Sorrows

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    Aww thank you @ScottPress, I'm glad I made an impression on someone.

    Though lol @Harrylover apparently finding actual incest more preferable than Ron getting with his friends mum because that hotness is only worthy of... being fucked by her own child?

    I think one that stayed with me was Hermione, out of freaking nowhere casting whatever spell makes bags bigger on the inside on her vag so she could fuck Gwarp.

    There was another that was a really well written and deeply creepy fic that was I realized halfway through carefully setting the pairing up to be schoolboy Harry/Dumbledore. They were taking it totally seriously, weaving in all these excuses as to why it was morally Ok for a 12 year old boy to 'start' a relationship with a 90+ year old teacher. Suddenly it hits you with a tenderly written 'virginity loss' scene with 13 year old Harry and I noped out of there. Of all the fics I've read with weird pairings that one stuck because I swear the author was actually serious about it. Real predator vibes.
     
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  14. Shinysavage

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    I read a fic a few years ago now that centred around Harry and Ginny having been kidnapped by Voldemort, and forced to be his sex slaves. In and of itself, I appreciate that it isn't that fucked up, certainly by the standards of fanfic, but it was...elevated, shall we say, by two things.
    First, there was Voldemort's obsession with them being clean inside and out, which led to scenes of them being bathed, shaved and given enemas by a pair of smirking house-elves.
    Second, a last minute twist into psychological stuff; they escape, Voldemort is killed, and a few years later, bar a newfound appreciation for relatively kinky sex, they've put it behind them. Then Ginny gets pregnant, and it's heavily implied that due to something Voldemort was doing while fucking them, the baby is in fact a reincarnation of Tom Riddle.
     
  15. Palindrome

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    I have to agree with a few of you: despite all the weird things I've read over the years, it's the writers who don't realise that it's fucked up that stay with you the most.

    There was a Naruto story I read where Naruto, 12 years old and written like it remarkably well, is a pretty lonely kid. So he puts two and two together and combines sexy-no-jutsu and his clones and starts fooling around.

    His clone gets pregnant, and somehow she can't dispel. So then the story follows this twelve-year old about to become a father to a clone of himself. Everyone knows he's fucked up, everyone treats him differently. It was quite a serious take on it and that was somehow way worse than if it was crack.
     
  16. AmerigoCorleone

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    A Veela's Worth.
     
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    Spiral Path has a lot of fucked up shit in it. Objectively, there's plenty of fics that are more fucked up than it, but there's a scene where a 12 or 13 year old fem!Harry is coerced into giving a BJ to Dean (by Dean) because he has the gimmick of having one spell he's good at, so good at that he can do wandlessly, so for him it's a compulsion charm. Anyways, fem!Harry is forced against her will to finish him, but she then has the presence of mind to keep his spunk in her mouth and use it later in some sort of ritual that creates a familiar for her. I think it was a lizard or snake or some shit. I might be misremembering some things since it's been like 7 years since I read it, but that just goes to show how long it's stuck with me. It's probably technically not even the most fucked up thing in that fic.
     
  18. TheLazyReader

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    Hey I remember that. Isnt that one where Tonks is renamed Natalia for some reason? From Wordhammer, is it?
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    Also, to stay on topic I'll add a story where Harry and his eight-year-old wife Gabrielle acquire a bunch of slaves, Tonks included. Except they're more like torture toys or something.
     
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    What Is Owed.
     
  20. Joe's Nemesis

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    For me, it's always the small twists the present the most disturbing images. Everything is so over-the-top anymore that nothing really bothers me in that sense (except rape. Just can't read it). Yep, it's the small twists that screw with my head.
     
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