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WIP When Harry met Wednesday by Jhotenko - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by ResExtensa, Nov 8, 2023.

  1. ResExtensa

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    Title: When Harry met Wednesday
    Author: Jhotenko
    Rating: M
    Genre: Horror/Humor
    Status: In-Progress
    Library Category: Crossover - Harry Potter & Addams Family
    Pairings: Harry P./Wednesday A.
    Summary: Sirius is dead, and Harry has reached his breaking point. A chance meeting with a pale girl and her family moves Harry's life in a new direction. Rated M for macabre themes, and later on suggestive adult content.
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11674317/1/When-Harry-met-Wednesday

    This story has some very strong points.
    * It's something quite novel, I've never seen a combination of HP and the Addams family before
    * The descriptions of the Addams family characters are fairly accurate
    * HP is heavily AU, but at least with a plausible explanation
    * the sex scenes don't feel primal and are fairly believable (or rather, considering Wednesday is Addams)

    It has a few weaknesses, too:

    * Story-wise it's not great , the best are the descriptions of the interactions between the characters;
    * Dumbledore bashing;
    * Occasional unnecessary brutality;

    4 out of 5 for me though.
     
  2. TheWiseTomato

    TheWiseTomato Prestigious Tomato ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    The Addams stuff was starting to get me, but then I got to the Obliviation and Dumbledore directing the Dursleys to abuse Harry so that he would grow up 'normal' and I noped out. 2/5, because the author can at least write technically well.
     
  3. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Enh. I read this a long time ago. It was bad, but not so bad that I stopped reading it. I'll give it a 3. A lot of bashing, Addams are more violent than depicted in most works, but interesting enough to read.
     
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