Oh will you ever enjoy the story then, Israfel. ... yeah ... i know i need a beat for spell checking... Anyone interested in the position can Email/PM/IM me ...

Try to keep reviews here please, Old... I like my story topics nice and clean...

 

I just took a lok at it Vash and i like your idea's hey even your spells are decent, someone asked for longer chapters and i think i gotta agree a bit more lengh and my reservatiuons will be no more. I liked the fight with Riddle personally it wasn't over the top in the power and even the spells that Harry has and used, showed there's promise while not completely getting anihalated (sp?). Can't wait for more.

 

Not a bad start to a story i look forward to the rest. There were some typo's that Inoticed but other than that a decent start.

 

New Chappie Up..

http://forums.darklordpotter.net/viewtopic.php?p=48418#48418
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2828293/3/

Lucy mkes his apperance!

 

Ahh, Good Chapter.

The Spelling? I don't mind, it's not my Mothertongue.
Very nice Harry. The Name is cool as well, but not as cool as Nero 8)

Keep on, I need more from this stuff.

 

very very nice my friend, very nice.

 

very good chapter. I look forward to the next chapter

 

Wow Vash this new fic you've got going on is quickly becomeing one of my most favorite. All of it seems to come together nicely, the manipulation of Lady Mores was done well, though i was surprised you didn't give Lucy more of a reaction to an apparent old family. Well i look forward to seeing the full extent of his amplified dark feelings.

 

good chapter, although I think harry`s transformation from what he was to what he now happened a bit to fast.

 

Ummm I'm a little confused... I like the story but what happened between ch 2 and 3? Why did Harry change???

 

He changed because, when he took the power, his heart wasn't exactly 'pure'. Like Dumbledore said in the first chapter, the "power" amplifies the feelings of the heart, and Harry had been thinking quite darky, and dabbling in a bit of the Dark Arts as well. So, when he took the power, it tooks those feelings and basically multiplied them by a 100, and made them his dominate state of minds and personality.

 

you do know that harry/lily has been done before in time travel. The Future Remaped i beleive it was, very good fic there but it was abandoned. i look forword to seeing what you will do with this one. do try to finish it though if there is one thing i dont like its abandoned fics unless they were really crappy

you copied a line from dakkath ( i think i spelled that right) that line about using the lower intestines for toilet paper. its a good start but you will have to write more for me to really get a good opinion. alot of storys start out good but get worse with each new chapter.

EDIT: Lets try not ot double post, edit your previous post if its the last posted comment if you must

 

Oh I get it... but wouldn't the power also amplify the other non-dark thoughts in his heart? Making him more of a gray sorta thing?

 

<_< the pairing isnt new, no, but the plot and story most certainly will.. and i did indeed copy the line from Dakaath, and I believe Sera knows that. Or he hasnt said anything to me about it at least.

 

Wow. Like your fics. I'm following this.
Update soon?

 

Yea that sucks.

Question;How does a computer blow up?Over usage or something?Never happend to me so I'm just wonderin.

 

It didnt blow up per ssy... my poor baby just died of heart failure

 

ya my comp is going to do that soon. its dying i cant leave it on a screensaver for more then 2 hours or it freezes and programs only work half the time

 

well, when in doubt get an Imac, they far outclass PC's