I think my computer is a bit broken aswell...either that or it really doesn't like me. It only turns on for more than 3 seconds half the time, another 1/4 of the time it stays on for 10 seconds and the last quater it actually starts up but then freezes and stays that way until i turn off at mains. Is there a solution to this problem other then a sledge hammer?

 

it sounds like your comp is overheating or something. thats usally why it would turn off or freeze on startup. check your power supply and your fan........ i actually have no idea but hey it sounds good to me

 

Ex had same problem ... kinda... it would load windows then freeze instantly.. that was dead ram...

 

i had the same prob(parents PC) the cooler of the CPU was damaged. After that was fixed, everything worked normal.

 

sigh.... it would seem my beta has lost the internet and gone MIA.... anyone else up for the job?

 

I could hook you up with my beta, who has been bugging me either for new chapters or finding other stories for him to beta. I think he is quite good, though since my drafts are bloated with errors I might not be a good judge for that.

Mrriddler

 

sweet... but id make sure he doesnt get offended easily before asknig him to beta for me... i have been known to write some pretty fucked up shit ya know...

 

DAMMIT!!!

I thought you'd updated. Oh Vash, don't tease me so! I can only stand so much, and I have to maintain my virtue! :winks coyly at Vash:

 

Well, if you do plan on having Hermione snuffed, you might want to tell him as he ships H/Hr but otherwise he's fairly level minded about everything...except H/G I think. He might have a problem with the n/c stuff in your other story but then he betas oldwolf's fics so who knows. I'll pm you with his msn messenger sn.

Mrriddler

 

Good so far. I understand the how of harry becoming eviler but I think it was a bit too sudden. Theres my critisism. Other then that, the idea of how he got thrown back in time, the plot and everythings great. Especially liked that you came up with an origional way to throw him back in time. Exploding time turners are a tad over-used now. Not that most the good ideas arnt also overused.

 

Time Travel

I like this a lot and the fact that he doesnt have superpowers is a major plus but I am just a bit confused, what time does he go back to? Is it just after Lily gets out of Hogwarts because thats what I would guess because of the Lucy's wedding happening.

 

Nah.. itd be about Lily's seventh year. according to HP-Lex Lucy gets out of hogwarts before they do. Narcissa is the middle child, Bella being the oldest.

 

time

Ah ok thanks that clears things up a bit

 

Good story, I like it, although veryshort at the moment T_T.

Please write some more!

 

DLP Work By Author Thread.

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New chapter is out.

 

Wow theres a new Chapter :mrgreen:

Great Chapter. The snake is beautiful.

Want to read more.

 

New chapter indeed.
Which was the whole point of changing his appearance after visiting Lucy-Poo? He sold him self out in the end. Poor Dimbledur, he won't know what hit him. :twisted:

 

nice chapter, not the best but it moves the plot along a bit.

 

Liked it.
It took some time to get it done, and it wasnt very long.
But nice nontheless