I agree

I agree, great until the harry/ginny in the last part. I can only hope that pansy decides to feed ginny to aragog. Delete the last chapter and rewrite without the harry/ginny!!!!!

 

I could even handle the H/G if it wasn't for the rushed and poor ending, and the H/g going from "aw lets treat her like a hurt lil sister", to "hey lets let her sleep in our bed, despite the fact she loves my boyfriend!!"

 

The first 3 chapters are BRILLIANT! ITs when Harry DOESN'T fuck Pansy after awhile that it starts to seem like BULLSHIT! and they call each other "family" HOw can anyone LIKE let alone consider Family that annoying redheaded slut?! And after a FEW WEEKS?! (Harry being family I understand with the TIme turner)

And how does he get engaged to someone who he's never broken the underwear barrier with. TO me, in modern times, not having pre-marrital sex is NOT an indicator of good values; its an indicator of religious UPTIGHTNESS.


I couldn't buy it. I mean, the dude kissed Cho, its not like he's a monk.

Also, the "we're so close we have a mental link" thing has begun to piss me off. People CAN'T communicate like this. The only times I like it are when its with a familiar. otherwise I don't buy it. ANd the quidditch thing at the end ("We'll form our own team!") was over the top in its stupidity. ANd GInny the vicitim ALWAYS pisses me off. I started an AU fic (that I will never finish as 7 books is too Many) that has the scene where GInny says, "I'm going to be expelled!" after Harry has rescued her. and Harry just wheels around and slaps her.


Anyway :sigh: so much potential wasted. Tragic

 

I remember that scene from after Chamber, where harry has just rescued her. People may be dead, and what does Ginny do? "I'm going to be expelled!"

If it were me I would have yelled at her. I also think the girl should have told somebody. She's TOO FUCKING STUPID!

Large chunks of memory missing? totally normal. ANd if I AM GOING to tell someone, the person I WOULD tell is a TWELVE YEAR-OLD!!!


The girl is just dumb. And the whole thing with the birthday card. UGH!!!

 

yeah, but think, the whole series is this shit.

11 year old fights off unbeatable odds, and doesnt ask for help the whole time. 12: voices screaming die, but doesn't say anything, 13h lets just go ass out running around in a field of dementors, and let me chase off hundreds of them despite the fact I can't barely handle 2 of them 2 years later, 14:I had to cheat my ass off to barely win a FIXED tournament...

I could list much more in detail, but I bore of how bad the writing is sometimes.

 

Thats because we don't read the fan fiction nearly as harshly... Though I will be the first to admit that I have read better fanfics than the 2nd and 6th books in the series.

As for Harry/Pansy/Ginny pairing... I find it hilarious. I mean seriously, since they wont fuck before marraige, Pansy and Harry use Ginny as a sex toy, then ditch her when they get married... Pissing off Ron, the Weasels, Herm-I-Spread-My-Legs-For-Redheads-Aprodite, and the rest of the morally uptight Order... Meanwhile Harry and Pansy laugh their asses off and say "we could buy and sell all of you thousands of times, and STILL have more money then the rest of Gringotts combined."

 

That would be cool, except that I think the author is too much of a H/G supporter to ever do something like that. That and it still involves having sex with Ginny...*shudder*.

 

Fair Point.

 

sex with ginny i'd rather make a deal with the devil

 

That can be arranged.

"YO!

Lucifer get your ass over here."

You two are on your own to work it out from here.

 

i think i got the better side of that deal....i get to be king of hell and he gets to ...er have fun...yes...fun with ginny :twisted:

 

I don't think having sixty different types of STDs can be classified as fun tho.

 

As well as the mange I'm certain Ginny carries.

 

I don't think I'd care for the lice and fleas I'm sure the poor whore carries with her.

 

thats why i got the better half of the deal