Title: Why is Harry Smiling?
Author: The-Caitiff
Rating:
Genre:Humor/Parody
DLP Category: Humor/Parody
Pairing: T for Teen?
Status: It's a oneshot, so it is done.
Summary: Harry turns up to breakfast with a massive hangover and a silly grin. What happened and with who?

address: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3097138/1/Why_is_Harry_Smiling

I liked this little oneshot. It involves some humor, some parody, a hungover and whistling Harry Potter, and a Voldemort that would not be found in cannon.

It's not something that would make a person think or have to piece out who is who. Everything is fairly straightforward. I checked the list in Reviews and I didn't see it. 9/10. It did make me chuckle.

 

Meh. Not bad, good idea, correct grammar. It could have been more though. The idea had much more potential, and it needed a bit more development in certain areas that feel "lacking" somehow.

Other than that, it's not a bad one-shot and it's entertaining enough to recommend it as a quick read.

3/5 IMO.

 

I'm with Nobody on this, it was good but there was just something that was missing that could make it into a proper humour fic.

3/5 for me.

 

I liked it, but it wasn't a humour fic because it wasn't constantly amusing; it was a joke story because all you were doing was waiting for the joke to unravel.

Amusing short read; any longer, and I wouldn't recommend it though

3/5

 

Just made me snort. Wasn't all that great. Kinda average I suppose. 3/5.

 

2/5. Average writing, unbelievable but not clever enough to make up for that fact, and a bit boring.

 

This was slightly amusing, but not really above average. The idea of Harry and Voldemort getting drunk together is somewhat interesting, but the rest of the fic just didn't cut it. Unlike most humor fics, which are a long series of jokes, this was just one big joke where we were waiting for the punchline. It really needed more. I give it 3/5

 

Agree to most, is average writing but I'll admit I actually laughed out loud. And a drunk Harry and Voldemort is far too funny to deny.

 

See, that's what I mean! It isn't great or perfect or anything, and yeah, a joke fic is a pretty good description for it. I just thought I'd put it out there for everyone else to have a chance to enjoy.

 

I thought it was alright. Nothing too special. Decent way to kill 5 minutes of my time. 3/5

 

I am not amused.

Was boring, nothing interesting happened and you knew it was Voldemort from the beginning. I know its meant to be a Humor fic, but since it wasn't funny you have to take it seriously, and Voldemort being pretty much render helpless by some Alcohol and some wrist bracer's made by the twins
was just stupid..... and not funny....


All in all.... crap. 1/5 just for being legible.

 

An OK idea, an OK joke and an OK fic. Its Average nothing more nothing less.

3/5

 

ARGHHH!!!

I saw the author name and (despite the title sounding somewhat familiar) eagerly clicked thinking The-Caitiff had updated... This is old old old... [sigh] I was hoping for some new hilarity.

--bornagainpenguin

 

A solid 4 from me just because...well...it hasn't been done by anyone else. A tuch of amusing introduced into an otherwise average fic.