Actually I believe I recall reading a Moegi pairing a while back. Also from the flow of the story, I don't think that Naruto would end up with someone younger unless the pairing doesn't come in until much later. My bet would be on Shizune actually.

 

First in the fandom?
Ah shit good luck with that...
that is unless of course your planning NaruxAkamaruxPakkun

yuck.

 

NarutoxRaikage, actually.

All that hot muscle - should be good, ya know?

 

Ton-ton? >.>

 

Naruto/Minato's Moms

 

I like that.

Naruto/Grandma.

 

But seriously good luck with that original pairing:awesome

So any word when that next chapter is coming out or you mostly focusing on Houses of Holy?

 

WW 5 should be out by the weekend, methinks.

 

Grandmas can be hot too you know.

:awesome

 

A proper stab at what the eventual pairing will be.

NarutoxIno's mum

(Stacy's Ahem! Ino's mum, has got it going on! She's all i've wanted and i've been waiting so long!) :banana:

 

It's getting off to a good start but there's a couple of things that bother me. Mostly, it's the use of the cliched 'happy masks' and new clothing. What's wrong with Naruto wearing orange, not because it's the cheapest thing, but that he actually likes the colour? Sasuke ears a giant red/white fan on his back, Sakura has pink hair and Kakashi is...well, no, he looks pretty cool. Even Orichimaru and the Sound Four have those weird rope things. Nothing wrong with an orange jumpsuit.

And what kind of 12 year old kid, jaded or not, tells everybody about his 'happy masks' and all that kind of crap. Don't get me wrong, it's probably all right but there are better ways to spring it on the reader other than using the same old Naruto cliches.

The Wave arc was a bit rushed. I understand you didn't want to get stuck there like a lot of other stories but it felt a little bare at times. It could have been used for some more characterisation or whatnot.

That said, I like this story. I'll give it 4/5

 

Howdy. FYI I've seen a Naruto/Raikage before. Also seen a Naruto/Tsuchikage's daughter. Think about that.

 

We've all seen that. And it's not the central pairing in Fuinjutsu, either. (As far as can be determined thus far.)

 

Naruto/ Fem!BeastRealm!Pein? Its never been done before.

 

It's also essentially necrophilia...

 

Would it be considered gay since the real Pein is a guy?

 

Canon Raikage?

Gigantic black man?

Ouch.

Which makes it excellent. :awesome

I suppose I could also do Naruto/Chick-that-becomes-Beast-Realm-Pain.

 

I wish I could say that the pairing would be Naruto/Gatou, but he's already dead. Instead, I will cast my vote for Gatou becoming a Pain Body.

 

Demon Realm Gatou would be epic.

He's like a little robo-midget from hell.

Someone needs to write this, methinks.