Title: Wizard on the Sea of Time
Author: Selenepotter
Rating: M
Genre: Crossover
Crossover: Island on the Sea of Time by S.M. Stirling
Pairing: Harry/OC
Status: in progress
Summery:This fic is related to my "Dudley Dursley and Dies the Fire" crossover fic. This one is a crossover with S. M. Stirling's trilogy that begins with "Island on the Sea of Time". I will reveal what happened to Harry and Luella M/F,Gen,Het,OFC,Oral,Preg,
Link:http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198798

 

Ok, seeing the number of views, I'll say something.

It's got a decent plot, which could work if better written. And there are some interesting scenes like when Lucella comes in with snakes all over her, but the story's ALL over the place and has enough plot holes to make it look like swiss cheese!! This and your other stories are just really really weird and don't seem to make much sense.

 

Dark, depressing, riled with strife and suffering. Well written and involving, the marks of a good fic.

 

I'd like to look at it, but the link isn't working for me. Is it posted anywhere else?

 

The story lacks a plot to follow. The ideas are nice but it's rushed and not that well written. Like said before, the story is all over the place and full of plot holes. 2/5 IMO

 

Thanks for posting the new link! But..erm...yeah, I'm not a fan of this one. It just doesn't make any sense. 2/5