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Abandoned Young Again: The Rewrite by Taliath - T

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by nonjon, Apr 25, 2006.

  1. CGB

    CGB Auror

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    Great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
    Maybe, but there may be the fight scene of the other Harry.
     
  2. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Absolutely wonderful. That's all I can say. The fight scene was almost done to perfection and it all flowed perfectly.

    I hope you grace the contest with your presence, I really do.
     
  3. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Just read it, and I have to say that I am mightily impressed. This story is very intruiging, and I am going to be sure to follow it.

    Good work liath.
     
  4. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    I haven't read a HP fic in a while due to the lack off good one but I'm glad I read this fic. It's really good. Keep up the good work.
     
  5. liath

    liath Seventh Year

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    Thanks everyone! I'm glad I got such positive reviews for this chapter. I have to admit, I was worried that the ending might disgruntle a lot of people--and though a few did mention it, most seem only curious as to what will happen.

    Anyway, the next chapter will hopefully give a clearer picture of what happened during the battle.

    So.

    Toodles for now, and thanks again!
     
  6. Eliyah

    Eliyah First Year

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    I loved the scene with Dumbledore and Minerva. Your McGonagall is particularly well built I like how she lead the Order in Dumbledore’s place. Keep up the good work!
     
  7. Dragon Watcher

    Dragon Watcher Third Year

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    hey, does this mean he'll have the scar or will he have a different one somewhere else? just curious
     
  8. liath

    liath Seventh Year

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    Hey, all!

    I'm back from an unexpected three week travelling vacation that left me bereft of any internet (or even computer) access.

    But I'm back, now, still suffering from jet lag--and very ready to pick up where I left off with my story.

    Oh, and school is starting up on the first of August (am dreading this: Senior year and college aps!). All in all, though, I feel like I had a very good summer vacation. It was awesome!

    Well, toodles for now! An update will soon be on the horizon!

    ~liath
    PS: to Dragon Watcher, yes Harry will have the same scar as in his past ^^
     
  9. Ham

    Ham First Year

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    The writing is top notch.. keeps you at the edge of your seat.

    I just wish Harry was more of a match for Voldy. Maybe it will happen in the future chapters, and I can't wait for it.
     
  10. Wisdom's Mountain

    Wisdom's Mountain Sixth Year

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    I enjoy this story, but I have to admit that Baby!Harry had me pretty frustrated for a while.

    I love your characterization of Prof. McGonagall. Most stories just pass her off as "strict", but this one delves deeper.
     
  11. Erotic Adventures of S

    Erotic Adventures of S Denarii Host

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    The time line at the end is great. When do we find out who the letter writter is? I'm thinking Malfoy or Snape since they turned Ron into a weasel. It wasnt made really clear in the story but the muggles now know about Magic dont they? I mean so much has happened to them they couldn't not know.
     
  12. arkeus

    arkeus Seventh Year

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    It seems it updated.
    I will edit, saying what i think of the chapter, as someone else already jumped the thread :)

    Edit: Quite nice, but i do seem to remember most of it, so maybe he had it out here... i quite liked the end, too.

    Really hoping the Future!Harry isn't polyjuiced!Dumbledore after having obliviated Harry like he did McGonagall. Want him to keep his memories.
     
    Last edited: Nov 20, 2006
  13. Nexus

    Nexus Denarii Host

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    Read the latest chapter. As usual 'Liath churns out a good chapter. But I fell the "outside entrance to the chamber of secrets" is quickly becoming an irritating cliche.

    Don't worry Arkeus it wont be polyjuiced!Dumbledore. Right Zarin......Zarin?
     
  14. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I dug the update. Good stuff Liath.

    Harry and McGonagall, sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S etc.

    lol. Good stuff.

    And now, my fanboy moment, UPDATE SOON!!! :D :D :D ;)
     
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