Title: A Twisted Timeline
Author: madnesspersonified
Rating: R
Genre: Drama, Humour
DLP Category: Alternates
Pairing: HGHP
Status: WIP
Summary: Much to his displeasure, Harry is thrown back through time into his six year old body. As a result, Harry decides to contort the timeline, purely for his own amusement.

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This fic isn't incredibly realistic (read: not realistic at all), and Dumbledore is very cookie cutter "For the greater good" "Sacrifice one for many" rahrahrah.

However, mobsterboss!Harry is pretty cool, as are some of the minor characters depictions. The author is rather gifted with humor, but problems arise when they try to insert plot.

If you are willing to suspend disbelief, it is a good little time killer, so I thought I'd see what you all think, and it contains some cool quotes like:

 

This have been around for a while... I could have sworn that it was posted on DLP before...

Having said that it is an awesomely funny fic... Mr. Fondlemember the goblin.... LOL

4/5

 

No, this hasn't been posted hear before, only the author's crossover fic.

That said, this certainly isn't the best story ever, but it's very entertaining and funny. A lot of changes to canon safe it from the Recycling Bin. And I'm not sure this will become H/Hr, did I miss something or what?

3.8/5, rounded up to a four.

 

Quite a nice fic, I am enjoying it so far I will have to give it 4/5.

 

You know, I have tried to read this on multiple occasions and I just don't like it, 1/5. But I am not going to officially rate the thread because I generally don't like Humor fics.

 

I liked this well enough until he did the whole mafia-kid thing. Some people can pull off silly, but his attempt just came out ridiculous.

 

Meh, it was kinda funny but I got bored pretty quickly.

3/5

 

This might have been a good fic. I don't know and never will know. The fact that I found three grammar errors right off the bat and the author couldn't decide how to properly spell the Killing Curse ticked me off. 2/5 for what might have been decent.

 

I found this to be a good fic, and any fic that calls Dumbledore a "manipulative young coot" and has a believable Girl!Blaise is good in my book, and while you may need to turn off disbelief a few times, its a great read IMO
4.5/5

 

Why is a 4 star story in the bin?

 

Certainly better than some of the stuff in the library. Not the best, but readable

 

I agree with ip82, the fic was pretty good until the kid mafia thing. Add that with 7 year old Hermione being uber smart, and I couldn't click the X button fast enough.

Homer

 

While this has definite flaws, it's a nice little vacation from reality. I've had a good time laughing at it, just as it's supposed to be. Because of the fact that it's in need of a beta reader who is good with grammar, (It has some errors. It's not as bad as about 75 percent of the stories out there, grammatically speaking, though.) and I've found a couple small plot holes, I can only give it 4/5.

 

I thought it was entertaining and doesn't deserve to be binned 4/5

 

Spelling and grammar are all right. The plot is generic, the characters are cookie cutter, and everyone except Harry is an idiot. Somehow, though, it amuses me.

3/5

 

It's light, shallow fun. Some of the humor is being stretched too far, but I always love a smart, kickass Harry.

3/5

 

A light, entertaining read. It was finished today. 4/5

 

I'll give the finished product a 4/5 for sheer entertainment value.