Title: ‘Quidditch Practice’
Author: Diviniti
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Erotica
DLP Category: Restricted Section
Pairing: Harry/Angelina, Katie, and Alicia
Status: Complete One-Shot
Summary: One shot PWP. Harry gets laid by three hot chasers when Angelina schedules a ‘extra Quidditch practice’ with only the seeker and chasers. These wicked girls certainly do plan to ride a broomsti...
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Posted because there is very little Harry/Gryffindor Chaser loving anymore (though there hasn't been much to begin with).

As the summary says, this is a PWP One-Shot. Good way to spend a few minutes of your time. For the most part, the spelling seems to be sound, i.e I didn't notice any glaring mistakes on the first read through. Smut is decent, and the community needs more Harry/Gryffindor Chasers fics.

4/5 Stars

 

Full of own, I think.

Of course, not the most well written thing I've read, but it's smut (with the chasers, no less).

Fuck it.

5/5

 

It appears the author is living out one of his fantasies through Harry.

I don't mind smut, as long as there's a plot behind it. There isn't here.

I forget who said it, but "Harems are the tools of the Virgin Fanboy".

0.5/5.

 

Like The Doc said its PWP..... but its Harry/OriginalGriffChasers.... so 5/5 XD

 

I thought the story was well written, and rather entertaining. I didn't notice any errors, but this is still not close to a masterpiece. I give it 4/5.

 

Is it me or did it read like a Penthouse forum letter? “I can’t believe it happened to me...” Then again, all PWP’s are pretty much like that.


The author likes the word “Sexy” and its variations.

and

That last line made me think of Zapp Brannigan from Futurama. It made it seem like a joke. And since none of the rest of the story had that mood, I think it hurt the story.

Pretty good, but nothing spectacular. Good to kill five minutes... err five minutes of reading I mean (get your minds out of the gutter, besides the smut wasn't that good).

Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)

 

lol Very nice. And a Canon!Shy!Harry, still very nicely written with a few spelling mistakes. 5/5 for me.

 

If I was to rate it as any other PWP I'd give it. 3/5 Not bad but nothing spectacular too.
However, as Jamven said, Harry/Gryffindor Cahsers fics are rare these days so I`ll give it 4/5.

 

Just from looking at the quote The Doctor provided I can see it's full of tense errors.

 

Considering the first line in the summary says "one-shot PWP", whoever wanted smut with plot should've stopped reading then and there.

Harry/Chasers smut. Girls built for speed... 3.5/5.

 

Exactly how is rubbing someone's ears saucy? Too rushed, unrealistic. 3/5

 

What the hell, I'll throw out my two cents.

The word sexy is overused. It should be brought out... sparringly, to say the least. But...

Sure, three times. Doesn't seem like a great amount. But it stuck out. In a bad way.

In closing, anyone here remember Brazillian Pimp? This guys stuff isn't that bad, but, hell, it's not that far off either.

1/5