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Complete 15 & on Death Row by concrete13rose - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Zevrillion, Oct 24, 2005.

  1. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Title: 15 & on Death Row
    Author: concrete13rose
    Rating: M
    Category: Action/Adventure/Drama
    Pairing: Harry/Luna/Narcissa
    Chapters: 10
    Words: 31,300
    Published: 2005
    Updated: ???
    Status: Complete

    Summary: AUish. 15’s too young to be innocent in Azkaban on death row 17’s too young to escape said fate… and that’s not all. So since when has the world cared about Harry’s wants?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2599660/1/
    Link to a text file: http://onj1.andrelouis.com/hp/15 & on Death Row.txt

    Just four chapters have been posted so far but it seems very promising.


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 18, 2012
    As posted by Snapesol...SoundofSilence the story was removed from ff.net.
    I linked a textfile I found, which lists 10 chapters ripped off ff.net. Apparently it is complete.
     
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  2. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    I concur, promising it is.
     
  3. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I wish it updated more often...
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I read this when it was only two chapters... updates needed.
     
  5. DGD

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    Awesome story. Chapter six is up.
     
  6. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    is this a classic "oh no, everyone has forsaken me!" "oh harry, forgive us for sending you to azkaban and burning all your shit" "oh alright" kinda sorta fic is it, i need more incentive than a one liner from harry to convince me this is not a piece of shit like most out there.
     
  7. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    Let's put it this way, it appears that Narcissa and Luna have teamed up to help him escape. Which is something I have not read before. So at least he won't be surrounded by his betrayers when he first gets out of Azkaban.
     
  8. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    alright, i'll give it a shot
     
  9. Lord Osiris

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    This story pleased me more then most of the azkaban stories out there, it's good so far, but if he does forgive all the back stabbing scum then i will be severly disappointed no?
     
  10. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I havnt seen many Azkaban stories where he actually turns fully evil after getting out of prison and becomes a Dark Lord. If I was him i'd be raising hell if i'd been locked up for even a year.

    This story always felt different, hopefully he wont forgive the fucking betrayers like he normally does in these stories.
     
  11. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I read this a few days after it came out, does it get better after the utter shit that it is up till chapter 2? Where Ron and Hermione are destroying his stuff and Ginny is snapping Hedwigs neck?

    Or where the chapters are anorexically short with A/n's taking up most of the space?
     
  12. Narf

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    Ah, that was why I stopped reading this fic! Because Ginny snapped Hedwig's neck. Seriously, she wouldn't do that. None of the people in the order would do that. Vernon, yes, Order, no.
     
  13. ip82

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    Author said that the whole snapping neck thing was a parody of other Azkaban fics. Too bad he didn't write it as one.

    Last two chaps were OK, it's getting better with time. There's hope for this fic yet.
     
  14. sephiroththebrokenangel

    sephiroththebrokenangel Fourth Year

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    azkaban fics

    ive never really been big into the harry in azkaban stories for a lot of reasons but ive found the reason to keep reading this...Harry breaks Dumbledores long nose, that right there makes it worth it for me
     
  15. Niffler Lord

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    It's an OK story. Donno about Harry becoming a Dark Lord. It seems to be more along the lines of "I don't give a fuck" Lord. Starts slow, but has some interesting ideas. One of which is Harry not crying over Hedwigs death. Then of course there is the "Please forgive us" bits... Last chapter was a little dissappointing though. I was expecting a little more after the build up.
     
  16. Merkava3

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    This fic is better than some that I've read, but it is a little confusing. The Luna and Narcissa part freaks me out a little.
     
  17. sephiroththebrokenangel

    sephiroththebrokenangel Fourth Year

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    It freaks you out? What about it freaks you out?
     
  18. oldmagic

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    the Narcissa part obviously and the fact that lonny is teaming up with the malfoy. isn't that enough as it is.
     
  19. Merkava3

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    Luna is mad, Narcissa is a Malfoy, strict and uptight. Them to together confuses me and slightly freaks me out.
     
  20. ip82

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    Both Narcissa and Luna seeking Harry out seems a bit unrealistic... why the hell would they do that? ... other than that standard clishe about Luna being always right and somehow knowing everything that's going on. Hello, maybe she's always spacing out BECAUSE SHE'S REALLY A LOON?

    But this story is not supposed to be realistic, so meh... It's ok I guess, but nothing special.