Epic lulz, I loved it.

Satanist!Harry is great, we need to see more of it.

4/5

 

There are maybe 2 other chapters in the series that are worth reading. The rest is crap.

 

Oh gods that was bloody awesome. Couple of minor points that annoyed me, but that's more LaVey's fault than the author's. 4.5/5 in all honesty, but I'll give it a 5; the sheer entertainment value more than makes up for any minor mistakes.

 

Which two? I don't want to read through all that crap you mentioned just to find two more like this......

 

Chapter 2 is semi-amusing, 3 is funny as hell, 6 and 8 are the same storyline in the average range, 7 and 9 are a touch below average with a few bright spots, and the rest make me wanna hurt stuff.

 

I remember this story being posted before, I gave up on it in chapter 5. I'll try to read it again later.

 

Hey, guess what?!

 

MERGED the dupe "For Review" thread with the one already in the Recycling Bin.

Not sure if the newer For Review votes carried over, so if you voted on it in For Review, you may need to vote here again.

 

I think it is the right place for the story. Most people are just rating two of the twelve chapters anyways.

I give 3/5 for chapter 11 and 12 and 2/5 for the story overall.

 

Somebody want to tell me who pissed in Kafka's cheerios? The Big Red Button Chapter 2 was yet another swing at DLP. It's starting to get aggravating in a puerile sort of way. Guess that means we're pissing off the HP community on a whole new level.

Does that mean someone is doing a good job?

Linkage: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4200154/2/

Edit: Well hell, it seems I'm the one who pissed off Kafka with the way I posted Accio! Brain. Well damn.

 

I loled. It's worth to read the reviews, too.

The author seems to dislike our treatment of "Accio Brain". But I agree with most posters above, the story is well placed in here. It's worth a few chuckles but overall it's just average/below average.

Grant him/her his/her little revenge.

 

My personal opinion of Big Red Button is that it's a preemptive strike against DLP.

After all, it's only a matter of time before one of our - shall we say, less tactful? - members finds his Harry/Hermione/Harry story, or his Hermione/Snape one.

*shudder*

 

I'm all over it.

...when I wake up.

 

Updated, with a sorta cool Ron goes back in time bit.

 

Updated with a Pokegirl x-over. It's semi-amusing and worth a look. 3.5/5 for this chapter.

 

Holy shit, its not a curse, its a talent!

Spoiler

FAAAAAHBOOOOM!! Neville managed to detonate his cauldron, taking out half of the classroom and the back wall. Miraculously, none of the students were seriously hurt.

“LONGBOTTOM!” Gunny bellowed after clawing his way out of the rubble. “HOW IN GOD’S NAME DID YOU MANAGE TO TURN A FUCKING BURN-SALVE INTO A WEAPON OF MASS DESTRUCTION?”

“I… um… I s-s-sort of d-d-dropped th-the mu-mu-murletap a-a-after for-forgetting to add th-th-the qua-quills, suh-sir…” Neville stammered out weakly.

“HOLY SHIT THAT WAS AMAZING! TEN POINTS TO GRYFFINDOR! GOD DAMNIT I WISH I KNEW THAT BACK IN ‘NAM!” He glared at the stunned classroom. “WHY THE HELL AREN’T YOU WRITING THAT DOWN!”

*Sets up cages for new plot bunnies*