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Arnes Challenge 1

Discussion in 'Challenges' started by Arne, Sep 27, 2007.

  1. Arne

    Arne Squib

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    Summary: Harry sends his memory and "soul back, but somthing went wrong!

    Harrys spel woked, but his "soul" and memories are ejected by jung Harry (without him even noticing it) and landed in first "easy" target thay could find. Obliviated Gilderoy Lockhart!

    Chaleng rules:

    1. Story realy starts only seconds after Gilderoy obliviated himself.

    2. Older Harry cant do nothing to rectify his error.

    3. Althou future Harry was almost godly, Gilderoy!Harry is only moderately strong and jung!Harry has only potencial to bee overpowerful. Gilderoy!Harry had all older Harrys memories.

    4. Althou older Harry realy mised his frends (even Ginny), he idealized them and is anoyed by their childishness (even young Harrys).

    5. Old Harry is moderatly dark, but his hate is reserved for Death Eathers, Snape and Draco.

    Thats all I think! This was inspired by story My Gilded Live from Skysaber. :p
    Sorry for the grammar, Im not native speaker. If You dont like it, can you please replace it ?
     
    Last edited: Sep 27, 2007
  2. Gullible

    Gullible Headmaster

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    Oww, my eyes.

    Please, take this horrible abomination of the boards, you are a murder of the English language, please, FIX YOUR GRAMMAR!
     
  3. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Poor grammar aside, the idea is actually pretty good. An interesting twist on the Harry-adopts-Harry plot. Lots of ways this can go down once the switch takes place.
     
  4. Jibril

    Jibril Headmaster

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    Oh my God! There is only one thing I can say.
    Cthulhu will NOT eat your soul! It would taste horrible.
    And, as ip82 said - the idea is interesting and has an potential to turn into good comedy story.
     
  5. Lord Apophis

    Lord Apophis Professor

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    It is an interesting idea, especially that the older Harry does not become friends with his old friends and is annoyed that they are so childish.

    Also while his future memories gives him a huge advantage so will it be interesting to see how he adapts to the fastly less powerful body he is in.

    This could be the beginning of a trully dark Harry as he becomes so annoyed at how childish his younger self is so he decides to defeat the Death Eaters and Voldemort himself but lose a fight against some Death Eaters because of his lack of power and begins to perform rituals to make himself more powerful, corrupting himself more and more with each ritual...
     
  6. malaga

    malaga Auror

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    Good idea. First though, what does jung mean? Most of your other mistakes, I can work out, but this is really confusing me.
     
  7. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    I think he meant young.

    Gilderoy!Harry had me wide-eyed for a moment.
     
  8. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    I actually laughed at Gildoroy!Harry. I've never seen that before. Very interesting idea.
     
  9. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    But why is future!Harry so strong but Gilderoy!Harry only moderately strong?
     
  10. Rin

    Rin Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter

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    A Harry who KNOWS that there's a God, and who analyses his dreams for their symbolic meaning, rather than for what is actually happening in them.
     
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