Title: Chaosestruction: My work is done here
Author: TheBonnie
Rating: K
Genre: timetravel
Pairing: is postHBP, but I don't think he gets back with ginny (no pas made)
Status: Work in Progress
Summary: Pre7thyear, Harry has a visitor when he gets out of the shower who sends him back in time to his third year!He's 13 again, Can he change the future, save three lives, and defeat Voldemort? We'll see!
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2908854/1/

thought I'd put it here, because seeing the numbers of reviews it's got it's not read much,( and I want updates)

 

This start is OK.

It's just that... eh, you DO realise that this will be eventually be Sirius/Snape slash, right? Coz that's what Harry requested from Cupid in chapter 1. It's still good enough story for now, I'm just giving a fair warning.

 

from my opinion this is a harry-centric fic, so I don't think we get al the sickly stuff. And knowing both charactrics I doubt we get fluf between those two.
so I think I can stomach it, may be funny tough, those two together.

 

As long as there isent any fluffy Sirius/Snape so can this story be great... also if he could snap Ginny out of her stalking and leave him alone would it be great

 

err Slash? Isn't anyone mildly disgusted by it? No offence to the homos but... uke:

 

Sirius/Snape?! That's worth a good laugh. Well, as long as it's not with Harry or the main plot of the story.

 

By Sirius/Snape fluff, yes... Because it proves the sheer idiocy of some people.

Of homosexuality? No. I can say that I am not. Why? Are you?

 

Sirus/Snape..... hmmm it would be funny if they were only compled to make fluffy comments to each other randomly.... nothing more. Of course they would then proceed to wash their mouths with the strongest cleaning fluids around.

Sirus: Look you snarky-assed oversided fruit bat...

Snape: Enough you mangy mutt.... do you know your eyes glow when you are angry?

Sirus: What???

Snape: What??? I didn't say that!!!

 

Random fluffy comments rule!

Also I have a question, will he be totally messing up the timeline or trying to keep things happening like they did as much as possible?

 

Mildly due to my over active imagination *shudders*

But I have got nothing against gay people. Its none of my business.

 

Alot of great stories are slash, I just read over it, cuz im more interested in the story than to just abandon it because it's harry/voldemort or something.

I'm just saying, try stories first, before you blow them because it's slash and miss some great stories...

 

I don't blow stories especially slash ones. The reason it has low reviews is because IT IS SLASH, I have no problem with people who like slash or whatever , but for me its too out of character to have homosexual relationships. Honestly a Snape/Sirus ship is just too unbelievable for me.

 

I dont mind the slash as long as it isnt slash smut that makes me gag

 

slash is fine as long as its believable and the smut and overly fluffy parts are okay as long as they are easily avoided meaning that they dont contain key parts of the story.

 

HP and the Marcello school is an example. There are two OC's who are gay. There is no problem reading that for, In fact in that particular fic, I found their banter rather amusing, but when it takes a Canon character and rips it from canon, I just dont bother to read. Similar to why I dont much like overly manipulative!Dumbledore or Harem!Harry fics

 

I read a story where Seamus was gay and kept trying to hit on Harry. Had Hermione bashing and a dominatrix!winky as well... What the hell was I on at the time? It was mostly just to freak Herman out though.

 

The story was by Fangalla Marie and it was a parody making fun of Cliche Azkiban Harry is inocent stories. I thought it was quite funny a year or so ago when I was reading it. I don't know if it was finished, but if you're bored its worth a quick read through.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2205019/15/

 

seems fine. sirius snape grossed me out, but meh, i can live with it. might have to do some drugs or drink some alcohol but i am willing to make that sacrifice. btw, can anyone tell me if you can be driven insane by hiccups (Sp?). i have had them for about an hour and am slowly losing the remaining sanioty i posses. I CANT FUNCTION.

 

I wasn't sure if the author was stilling doing this. When the new chapter (3) was put up, the specific names where taken out.

 

I happen to really like this fic. Slash and the like do not really bother me that much, as long as it's well written.