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Dec 2017 - Story Competition

Discussion in 'The Lone 2017 Competition' started by Ched, Dec 17, 2017.

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  1. ScottPress

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    @CheddarTrek, voting closes today at midnight, or is it inclusive with Jan 3rd?
     
  2. AlbusPHolmes

    AlbusPHolmes The Alchemist

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    I second this. I still have to leave reviews on two remaining entries and I'll have a couple of hours to spare to do this tomorrow.
     
  3. Oz

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    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Just a reminder to all who have reviewed: Your reviews will only count if you have reviewed all stories.
     
  5. Conquistador

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    @CheddarTrek

    I haven't been able to review the stories this time due to being busy and feeling like I would be unable to do them justice in such a short amount of time.

    However, I think that while keeping the first three categories that you named out of 5 possible points, the other should be made out of 10. This can also be called overall or anything of the sort. I think that this is important because more than bad mechanics or pacing or plot, it's how these three things fit into the story that's important. The most important thing is how everything comes together. How does the story strike the reader. You could have a technically good story just based on a terrible idea. Or it could be that the characters feel like robots. A variety of problems is possible. Weighting is very important and this overall/other category clearly means the most.

    That's my two cents. I hope this helps you.
     
  6. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I just want to clarify something, because I've seen that the thread ratings have been utilized by people. Those are not indicative of a vote, even if they do it on all of them. They have to actually write a review, correct?

    @Halt thanks, just wanted to make sure so that people didn't think their thread rate counted as a review.
     
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  7. Halt

    Halt 1/3 of the Note Bros. Moderator

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  8. Anarchy

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    One thing I seem to be noticing is that there seems to be a bit of a disconnect between vote score and actual feeling about a story. Perhaps that's intentional in an attempt to be more neutral as a whole when judging, but something just feels a bit off. Like, what exactly is the end goal when a bunch of people (including myself) say that Story X is technically the best (and voted as such), but we all enjoyed Story Y more?
     
  9. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter

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    So are you asking how/if it affects the voting outcome?

    I'd say that people can enjoy the idea, but rate it lower on a technical level. So I don't think anything is off.

    It looks like its going to boil down to if Story X has 300 points, and Story Y has 250, then X is the clear winner. The review is just commentary, so yes, I think it appears that people are trying to remain neutral and not let their feelings guide their points, and are using the points as a means to give a more technical review.
     
  10. Lindsey

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    Is there a place for us to submit prompts for the future? I have a few ideas (and some which I would love to write for).

    It would be pretty great if there was an anonymous place to put our ideas on prompts, that can be looked at by the admins and selected (or, perhaps voted for if people are interested, it might bring more submissions if tons of people love a certain prompt).
     
  11. Dicra

    Dicra Groundskeeper

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    In general, more of these prompts (one every two/three months or so) would be a great thing. I didn't participate in this one at all, but that's down to not enough available time, which will hopefully get better around May/June this year.
     
  12. Jarizok

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    I don’t know about the staying neutral bit. I didn’t personally make an effort to separate my personal feelings on the entries from their ‘objective’ quality at all really, nor do I think that’s necessarily the way it should be done.

    If we do decide to go that route then I’d like to second or third or whatever the call for a ‘overall enjoyment’ category to be added to the technical scoring sections we already have.
     
  13. Xiph0

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    Voting is done today at midnight (PST - my time), for consistency with how submissions were handled.
     
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  14. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    Sorry I didn't answer that question earlier - I'd been trying not to post in order to 'save' my 6000th post for submitting my entry to this competition in WbA (I didn't finish it in time but the draft is done now).

    Regardless... GREAT job everyone! I feel like we had a successful turn-out from contestants and voters both. I'm looking forward to the next one, which will hopefully be even better.

    Remember that I am willing to award a Steam game to any of the five DLPers who entered, regardless of how you came out in the rankings. Just PM me and I'll confirm with Xiph0 (and otherwise keep you anonymous if you want that).
     
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    This is exactly why I suggested creating an overall category worth the most amount of points...I really hope that idea is taken into consideration.
     
  16. Jarizok

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    Will a new thread be created in Announcements for 2018 competition winners or will it all stay here in the Story competitions thread?
     
  17. Ched

    Ched Da Trek Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐⭐

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    There will be a new thread for each competition.
     
  18. Jarizok

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    How long does Joe have to come up with a prompt? How long will voting be open? ‘Cause if we want a January competition people will need time to actually write as well obviously.
     
  19. Joe

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    Prompt: Harry will leave Hogwarts and start a softball team, with sexy results.

    ...this is what happens when you rush me.
     
  20. Nemrut

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    Asking for a friend, but can we veto that? = P
     
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