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'Fake' Imperious Bellatrix Challenge #1

Discussion in 'Challenges' started by SmileOfTheKill, Dec 22, 2007.

  1. SmileOfTheKill

    SmileOfTheKill Magical Amber

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    Oneshot

    When: After Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix and Sirius is dead.

    Who: Harry/Bellatrix

    Plot: After reading a bit of the topic "Insane Bellatrix." I though of a plot thing.
    Now, the 'blood protection' with Harry in his house, can Bellatrix trick Harry Potter to allowing Harry to screw himself over.
    Basically Bellatrix goes to Harry's house, but she can't harm him.
    Considering Harry is bit of an idiot at times, Bellatrix pretends to be under imperious or something fake like that.
    Then Harry for some reason, leaves the house or lets Bellatrix inside enough to throw a portkey at Harry.
    Bellatrix would bring Harry to Voldemort little castle. Then Bellatrix shows her true side, and talks/hurts Harry. Then Harry is left to meet Voldemort and the story is over.

    Reason for the OneShot: Show how Bellatrix is truly insane and evil. No happy but imperious crap. This is also to show what would happen to Harry if Bellatrix was in character in all the horrible nice Bella fics. This isn't meant to be a torture fic, but made to ruin how authors use the plot of nice Bella all the time.
     
  2. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Fairly sure it's been done.
     
  3. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    We need one where this happens, and Harry gets away and subdues rapes her anyways.
     
  4. Koalas

    Koalas First Year ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I think giving Harry a portkey to Death Eater HQ would count as having intent to harm him.
     
  5. Averis

    Averis Don of Delivery ~ Prestige ~

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    I think it would better if Voldemort and Bellatrix conspired on a plan to do just what you're describing, but when she entered Privet Drive, she immediately became a blackened guey spot on the pavement that Harry had to clean up.

    Just a thought.
     
  6. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Do you have a link? this idea sounds quite interesting, and I've got nothing better to do at the moment.
     
  7. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Seen it, or Very similar anyway. Malfoy mansion, Weak chains, Mistress Bella becomes Bondage Bella type thing. Can't remember where though, sorry. It was a decent enough story, but that was before I was a member here.
     
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