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FanFiction Pet Peeves

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Levi, May 3, 2005.

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  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Quite right! fnd it quite annoying!

    *nods* agreed wholeheartedly. Am writing something to counteract this..

    Wouldnt mind seeing the authors of these getting the spoon/knife/fork treatment. or maybe her falling from the astonomy tower onto hermy and the im-an-idiot-but-master-war-stratigest-ronald

    And Ive read quite a few stories where these are all wrapped up together for one horrible package!

    developing many plans for them! saw a show on the history channel on torture... gave me a very good idea!
     
  2. Anonymous

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    OOOYAYAYAY! ok some things realllly piss me off... like...


    My name is Harry Potter and i am a God. I could flick my finger and turn Voldemort into a festering puddle of urine, BUT i'm gonna sit on my ass and cry about my dead godfather who i never had a decent conversation with in my life. Oh and then i'm going to get some disease that mysteriously destroyes my powers RIGHT before i go to battle the Dark Dude! (seen this a couple times and it makes me mad! Like....if you're that powerful why dont u finish it already instead of doing all this other shit...god)

    Umm what else... OH YEA! When Harry starts to learn Dark Magic but turns bipolar because "its corrupting", if he's gonna learn it choose a friggen direction goddamit!

    ANYTHING where Snape is his father, its just wrong ok?

    Where his parent's families some 1000 years ago married a demon and now a millennium later Harry is the only person in his family to be able to turn into a demonic form...puh-leeze!

    ANYTHING where Harry is raped by Vernon or Dudley, come on folks! We know he was starved and shoved in a cupboard and occasionally hit BUT RAPED?! I highly doubt that those two are so corrupt, i mean so what? Dudley drinks and smokes weed...what teenager doesn't? and Vernon has a temper...but now he finds Harry "Beautiful, and irresistable" yea...rite buddy...go sit in a dark corner and keep your fantasies to yourself...thanks!

    ANYTHING WHERE HARRY HAS A JAPANESE FAMILY MEMBER WHO TEACHES HIM ANYTHING RELATING TO INUYASHA, DRAGON BALL, OR ANYOTHER ANIME! Harry Potter is a FANTASY NOVEL, NOT a japanese anime film! :evil:

    And the one thing I absolutely hate with all my soul are any fics where Harry is angsty (yay fun!) shows up at 12 Grimmauld Place, tries to be alone and is SLAPPED by some upstart redheaded twat who thinks she can compare her life because she had one small incident WHICH SHE HAS NO RECOLLECTION OF where Voldie possessed her!! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?! Who does she think she is that she can go up to this kid who is MOURNING for his godfather and tell him to "suck it up cuz i was possessed so i know what you're going through" GRR

    And the Most Most Most Most Most Most hated thing in almost EVERY FIC that i've ever read are the following two words....

    I DARESAY

    Albus Dumbledore is over 100 years old, do you not think over that century his vocabulary has grown so that he does not have to repeat this phrase after every other sentence?! :evil: :evil:

    ...i feel better now
     
  3. Avitus

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    ^^ that was me... is there a problem with the login feature? everytime i log in, by the time i go to post something its logged me out already :cry:
     
  4. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    I will look into it, it may just be that I need to set a cookie url rather than using a NULL value (works on most servers).
     
  5. Avitus

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    shmanks :D
     
  6. tinkerpixy

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    Let's see, I've got so many that it would take forever to pick, so I'll just choose some random ones.

    - Canon Rape. It drives me absolutely nuts when people blatantly ignore things without any explanation or any warning (AU or otherwise). And of course I say this, but I am probably quite guilty of it in my own fic.

    - Abused!Draco. I just can't see it. He worships his father, and I find it highly unlikely that his spoiled personality comes from being smacked around.

    - Ginny or Hermione going through a makeover and suddenly being absolutely gorgeous so that Harry falls suddenly in love with them.

    - Harry the Cutter. Self-explanatory.

    - People that write author's notes after practically evey sentence - goes something like this: "Harry looked up wearily as Ron entered the room, wishing the redhead would go away." (Harry's so gonna leik H8 Ron in this fic, OK!!11!!)

    - People that don't warn for Animal Cruelty in their fics. I know this might sound odd on a Dark!Harry forum, but I am a huge animal person. Do whatever you want to the animals in your fics, but if you are going to be torturing, maiming, or otherwise harming a kitten, dog, snake, whatever, then please warn for it, so I can hit the back button.

    I'll stop rambling now, but those are just a few of my pet peeves. :p
     
  7. Lord Necros

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    What really pisses me off is everytime I go on ffn

    -the stupid search thing is useless as well as there pairing engine

    -Slash fics are just over killed with harry/who ever guy

    -SOme of us would like to find a fic where harry is not a pansy ass little wanker stuck with hermione or ginny

    -Vampire fics WHat thwe hell are ppl thinking ALL SLASH write a hetero version for people jesus h. christ

    - to many fics about the same general subject
    a, harry escapes azkaban and ends up on some island
    b, Dumbledork is a manipulative bastard
    c, harry always has the same pet in dark fics a basalisk and a phoenix(be it black or normal)
     
  8. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

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    Things that really piss me off in fanfiction:

    (1) Slash - I have nothing against homosexuals, one of my friends is homosexual, but when people put Harry Potter with a guy, it just squicks me especially Snape and Malfoy...

    (2) Harry/Malfoy, Harry/Snape - These people hate each other. I'm sorry, but no, that's not sexual tension that you see there. That's actual hate.

    (3) Harry/Voldemort - Hmm...the guy killed his parents, indirectly killed his godfather, kills innocent muggles, tortures his followers...need I go on?

    (5)Ginny suddenly becoming a main character - I kind of like Ginny, when she's portrayed well. In the books she barely has a role, but when I read fanfiction she's suddenly Hermione's best friend and part of the trio. Which then becomes a quartet. And she's usually the one that brings Harry out of his self-loathing...as if she knows him.

    (6) When Ron is suddenly a master strategist - Heh, there's a topic in this forum on this, my opinion is stated there.
     
  9. Lord Ravenclaw

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    This is also linked to "Ginny gets Harry out of his depression by whining that she was possessed too" despite she didn't even remember much of it.

    One of my major pet peeves is where an author brings in a Mary-Sue or Gary-Stu, especially how they bring them in. American transfer student...cliche. A conveinent OC that happens to be in the Order HQ. I like OCs that truely are OCs though, not just some fangirl wanting to be closer to her H/D/Her wet-dream.
     
  10. IndoGhost

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    you all covered pretty much every thing
    i just want to add is that if harry starts being cold and wants nothing to do with ron and hermione and the rest of his"family" then why the hell do you secretly make him be concerned over them??

    and i would also like to add the why then hell would Dumbledore be evil or manipulitave(sp?) or whatever when MAYBE he just a nice guy who is human and made some mistake in his life.why would you turn him in a ligh version of voldemort come on people.harry dosent have to like him for his mistakes but dont make him evil or whatever to make so harry has a reason to hate him.i mean thats just me
     
  11. Midknight

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    adding into my peeves is something i thought of in another thread.

    +stories where the author is too lazy to come up with their own spells, and instead has entire battles where ppl are casting tickle/disarming/minor cutting/pain/ and the killing curse.

    And after today's reading session I've come up with a few more, which are probably fairly high on my all time list now:

    -stories that start off strong and good, but suddenly peter off for no reason. Alot of Azkaban stories have these. They start off great, but then they just die down to tons of boring repetative chapters.

    -Stories that have Harry become near godlike in power in the start, and yet he STILL GOES BACK TO HOGWARTS and struggles with his classes?!?!?!

    Sorry, even the "he's going back to spy" angle is BS. with godlike powers and tons of cash, he could PAY someone to spy FOR him.

    Simply put if you write a God-Harry fic and you you can't write the )(*^&@& story without using Hogwart's experiences to be filler for 50K words, then DONT WRITE the story!

    I really cannot start to believe after he's been in touch with so much power, that he'd NEED to go to class. Even the whole "SO Dumbledore won't be suspicious" angle is crap. If the author spends half the story building Harry up to God, and stronger then Dumbles, screw it, kill Dumbles!
     
  12. IndoGhost

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    i've noticed that too
     
  13. Antivash

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    YES!

    That is SOOO fucking annoying.. i dunt mind the occasional godlike!harry .. but now all the authors kinda suck.. and there are no good new ones.. or old ones for that matter... The one by Ensign [Harry Potter and The Walkers I think] wasn't to bad but i dun think it falls into that catagory and its a HP/GW ... i was ... concerned about reading it after that though...
     
  14. Lord Ravenclaw

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    The Walkers was one I hated. He's this being who is thousands of years old with battle experience, yet he goes back with his friends.

    Lord Caer of Azkaban was one of my favorites. I logged on every day waiting for an update, but then it tapered off into a boring story.

    This is why I strive to make my story better by avoiding these things.
     
  15. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Lord Caer was good, but the way he was writing it.. he needs to just have a 3some between Becky/Hermione/Harry and get it over with, and stop all this "We reallllllllllllllllyyyyyyy care about you.. alot" crap. Just have them bang the guy and get it over with, all this beating around this bush crap is annoying to read.

    It's well written other then that, but it went to hell as soon as the author brought Harry and his SMALL FREAKING studen army to Hogwarts. I mean if those kids were ALL he had at his command yeah I could see him being forced, but Azkaban has a freaking standing military in that story =(

    Harry's going to Azkaban for a "brief" time in my story, but omg is there going to be hell to pay for it. No going back to Hogwarts! Filler material? I don't need no stinkin' filler material
     
  16. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    yeah.. it was slightly annoying harry went back to hogwarts in wakers but i stopped reading it around chapter 10 so i dunno if it got any better,,, prolly not..

    and yeah.. i liked Caer for a while, while it looked to be a HP/OC .. but im kinda iffy on the whole HP/HG/OC thing...

    yeah and the returning to hogwarts filler... bah... not worth it... ive got a sort of Evil/Azkaban!harry combo thing going... its fun to write when i can get it to go right... and ginny weasley even gets hers in the first chapter! ^_^ ... now if i can only finish it!
     
  17. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

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    Eh, since this is a FanFic peeve forum...

    I didn't really like Lord of Caer Azkaban. I feel that in stories like these, Harry gets used to his new status way too fast. And Rebecca just pissed me off to no end after she sent Ron away. The fact that he gets used to Rebecca so fast, and starts calling her 'Becky' almost right away is annoying too.

    I hate it when authors just make Harry so mature, and so knowledgeable in politics as well. Bah. He's a teenager.
     
  18. Midknight

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    I kinda of liked the way she got rid of the annoying idiot. But its personal preference I guess.

    Harry's gonna be mature in my story as well, but for the simple fact I know how I acted as a teenager, WAY more mature then the kids have been written by JKR. Well on most fronts anyway. My harry, when he's still in his teens is going to have his sex libido set on overdrive, like all teens do =)

    On the maturity level, for example, whining about Sirius? PLUZE! He's had what 2 decent conversations with Harry? Hell Harry knows the nameless mailperson better then he knows Sirius.
     
  19. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

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    Well, I'm not saying not to make him mature, I'm just saying to take it at a little slower pace. From a scrawny little kid with average grades, planting in his Aunt's garden, to the strong, smart, capable leader of a army? This all happens before summer ends? That's just not feasible.
     
  20. Lord Ravenclaw

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    Which is why I'm giving him a long time in the past for the Era of Hogwarts...that should be sufficent.
     
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