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Oneshot Foolproof by Lowlands Girl - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Xiph0, Apr 3, 2007.

  1. MMBeranek

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    The unusual pairing was interesting, and the underlying plot was fun. I just wish it had been a little more developed/longer. Even for a one-shot piece it could have been a little more detailed. 3/5