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WIP Game Freeze by Nagashizuri - Pokemon - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by The Arid Legion, Sep 3, 2011.

  1. The Arid Legion

    The Arid Legion Professor

    Oct 6, 2010
    Title: Game Freeze
    Author: Nagashizuri
    Rating: M
    Genre: Humor/Adventure(Horror?)
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: None
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Or Why Turning It Off Then Back On Again Won't Help. One unfortunate games journalist takes the Generation Seven games for a test drive, whether he wants to or not. Rated M for foul language, occasional violence and other fun stuff.
    Link: Game Freeze

    From my post in Almost Reccomendable:

    This is honestly my favourite Pokemon fic right now. And it shouldn't be. It's silly and parts of it make no sense at all, but I still love it.

    The authors writing style is odd and in places kinda flowery but it still fits.

    Read it, and I can almost garuntee you'll end up loving it.

    And if not, well, can't blame a guy for liking something you don't.

    5/5 from me.
  2. CrackedMind

    CrackedMind Minister of Magic

    Jul 17, 2011
    New Jersey
    I was commanded to bump by the good Legion, and so I shall.

    I didn't like it. I couldn't truly read past the first chapter without wincing.

    And then I read a little more, and enjoyed it slightly.

    The story is OK, not library material, but OK none the less. 3/5
  3. Styx0444

    Styx0444 Minister of Magic

    Feb 11, 2010
    Between here and there.
    I haven't read much pokemon fanfiction, but I decided to give this a shot. I loved it. It has flaws, it breaks the fourth wall a little to much, and some spots feel like the author ran out of jokes, then decided to keep talking in the hopes of saying something funny. In fact, the story's flaws should make it unreadable. Somehow, though, it ends up being great.