Title: God of the Machine
Author: The Carnivorous Muffin
Rating: T
Genre: Horror/Friendship
Status: WIP
Fandom: Death Note
Pairings: none
Summary: Upon entering the world of Death Note Anna Jones considers her survival and the prices she is willing to pay.
Link: God of the Machine


Before you lynch me for posting a Self-Insert story, please consider the actual content.

First thing: This SI does not have any special powers, isn't all that super-smart and does not have any Mary Sue qualities. She's ordinary (except for the whole another-world thing).

Second thing: This SI does not fall in love in any of the Death Note characters and her stay in the DN world isn't fun and roses at all. Things are actually quite hard for her.

Third thing: The story is actually written quite well, so give it a chance.

The fact that Light is also a big character in this story is a plus for me, because I always root for Kira to win.

5/5

 

Moved based on the votes.

 

This is dumb. There is no way to make a SI without it being dumb, and this proved it.

I get it, she is super weak and can't escape. Maybe Light will chain her in the room and gag her so she couldn't escape. Wait...

The hell doesn't she escape?

Because hell, I didn't know about the magic binding television.

Also this. It is obviously designed to be a story where the SI is randomly attached to Kira and it is bloody pointless. Death Note is the best when it is dumb and campy and plans upon plans are being made. This is just a love story to Kira.

 

Get this shit out of the Library please.

 

I read the first chapter, and the main character seemed to be built to generate pity from the reader. That made me click the x, I can not stand those kind of characters. 1/5 from me.