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Hybrid Theory by WickedMe763 - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Raijin, Jun 9, 2006.

  1. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    Title: Hybrid Theory
    Author: WickedMe763
    Rating: M
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
    Pairing: Harry/Tonks
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Everything has been taken my childhood, my freedom, my humanity... and probably my soul as well. I'm a chimera now, a hybrid. Future Honks. Possibly. Maybe.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2787152/1/

    Eh i don't know what to say really though this fanfic would probably fit in with the alternates as well.
     
  2. Cthulu

    Cthulu Unintelligent Bigot

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    just reading the summary id say that it should be with the alternates....
     
  3. Patrik f

    Patrik f Guest

    I rather liked this story even as I dont like the idea of all the other hybrids. I feel it would be better if Harry would be the only hybrid.
     
  4. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    You're probably right though Harry is stronger then most of the hybrids i think. Whats with Harry always being the unique stronger then everyone else thing that 90% of fanfics have. I mean Harry can be strong but he should at least have some people on his side that are equal or over his power besides the old guys(I.E. Flamel and Dumbledore).
     
  5. matthiasblack

    matthiasblack Squib

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    i agree. He is only 16 and not the second coming of Merlin. He should win his battles by using his unique view on magic and not by overpowering experienced death eaters.
     
  6. KANE

    KANE Groundskeeper

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    I didn't like the story too much. I thought it was a pretty much blatent rip-off of underworld, at least at the beginning anyway. I wasn't really able to get into it very well. And i agree with raijin as well
     
  7. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    meh.. i like it I suppose. Its one of those guilty pleasure things.
     
  8. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    I agree with Vash here...this is pretty 'meh' for a library story. It's only got 25k words and it's abandoned.

    It's not particularly well-written, and it's a strange mix of elements from Underworld and V for Vendetta. Harry was 'turned' by several creatures as a child, and a shadowy organization trains him to be an assassin (of course).

    2/5
     
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