If you are still in need of a beta, I could help you out with grammar and such.

 

I'd also like to help you in any form you need it; just give me a holler.

 

Sorry, I've been rather busy for the past week. To be honest, I've deleted the first chapter since it's such a mess. I've decided that I'll be plotting out the whole or the majority of the story before I start writing. That way plot holes will be avoided.

I'm just trying to figure everything out and making sure that I can do it well before deciding ot spend the next few months writing this.