Title: Inremeabilis
Author: Vash.The.Unholy
Rating: NC-17
Published: January 20, 2007
Words: 2883
Suggested Category: Restricted Section
Summary: Further into the mind of Harry Potter, HeWhoSlayed. How will the web be spun?[AU, Dark, Heavy Sexual References, not a Children Story! Sequel to Oedipus Flower]
Link: DLPNet Ficwad PatronusCharm


Checked: July 30, 2012:
The story was deleted on ff.net, but is also available on PatronusCharm

Checked by Dark Syaoran, June 6, 2014.
Fixed faulty Ficwad link.

 

Good first chapter so far. It is going to be interesting to see where Harry and the Order go from here. Good job so far.

4/5 for Inremeabilis so far.

 

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111(shift)

No smut! I'm impressed, Vash.

The chapter is a little short, and Harry is a little inarticulate, and screams in all caps, but not bad. I can't wait to see how messed up his sister is!

 

Oh hell yes. I can't wait for you to continue this Vash. I wondered if we were ever going to see Harry get his revenge.

 

Very nice start, but I have to admit the Albus perspective was a bit odd. I can't quite put my finger on it, but it seemed too... young, for lack of a better term. Maybe adding in some sort of brief flash to Riddle's disappearance at the end of his seventh year with his followers would help show his age, or something with Grinewald. Regardless, nice start, and I can't wait to see what Harry does to Hestia, Emmiline, et al before he hunts down Lily...
4/5

 

Great start. 4.67/5

 

I liked it alot. I can't quite grasp the Dumbledore P.O.V, because we've never really been given a look at his mind in any Canon story.

I liked how you portrayed Azkaban!Harry. And the rape of Bellatrix, was quite funny for me to read.

I await more, if there is more planned.

4.5/5

 

Hmm, it makes you wonder what Harry's next goal is. I distinctly remember that in the last story, he vowed revenge on Sirius and his entire family, so that might be his first step.
Of course, with the apparent resurrection of Voldemort, he might ally or join up with the Dark Lord....but somehow I don't see it coming. Harry appears to be to vain to follow somebody else.

Anyways, 5/5 for a good start. I'm looking forward to the next installment

 

Great start for the story. I cant wait to see what Harry will do now that he is free, and also how Lily and his sister react to him being free...

 

Great story. I take it all Harry's.. er.. frends are female (aka harem), right? And it would have been fun to read Roddy's opinion on his wife misfortune. (I always thought that other Lestranges suppose to be somethere near).I look foward to insight to Harry's plans and Riddle and Harry interaction.5/5.

 

i am surprised that there is not any sex scenes in the fic. however, i like the first chapter although it is a bit short. good work.

 

YEEEEEEEES. I too have long awaited this sequal. Hooray! Keep it up.

 

Albus's character did seem young, but he's a difficult character to write without being boring or tedious.

Sheep
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5

 

Yes Vash,
Add something nice for adult readers.

 

I helped beta it so you already know it's great.

Twas good Vashy, keep it up.

 

Nice continuation on from Oedipus Flower, can't wait to see how Harry exacts his revenge, keep up the good work

 

Yeah. I forgot to mention that in a note. Dwit, Amerision, Surarrin, and many many more helped me with this. kudos to all those who did and I've forgotten.

 

Vash I am both proud of you and disgusted with you. NO SMUT!!!!!!!

Other than that I like it pretty well. UPDATE!!!