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Jigsaw!Harry Fanfic Idea

Discussion in 'Challenges' started by Coranth, May 29, 2006.

  1. se7en

    se7en Professor

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    I like the post-war idea. It's much more usable, without any conflicts. But watching the movie is alright too.
     
  2. Cupspeaker

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  3. Coranth

    Coranth Guest

    Cupspeaker...

    An excellent first chapter, though I do have one little nitpick. The letter Harry recieves should be a little more ominous.

    ***

    Mr. Harry James Potter,

    You are hereby accused of the following indictments:

    Breaking and entering into the secure facility known as 'The Department of Mysteries' within the Ministry of Magic.

    The illegal use of spells within said Ministry facility.

    Leading a band of cohorts into said Ministry facility.

    The use of the Unforgiveable 'Cruciatus' Curse on the Pureblood Witch Bellatrix Black-Lestrange.

    You will present yourself before the Wizengamot for a full trial, which will take place in Courtroom Ten within the Ministry of Magic, on the 14th of September. Failure to comply with this directive will result in your immediate arrest and persecution. If you have any questions regarding your case please feel free to write to the Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, Amelia Bones.

    Cornelius Oswald Fudge

    ***

    Still... I thought this chapter was awesome, and having Harry end up in Azkaban was the perfect way to get his hatred and bitterness flowing. With that fueling his mind, he's gonna put the fear of JIGSAW into the Wizarding World, and make ol' Voldie look like an amateur!
     
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  4. DGD

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