Title: Just a Word
Author: Saucie
Rating: K+
Genre: General
Library Category: General
Status: Complete
Pairings: Ron/Hermione
Summary: She says You-Know-Who's name now. He hates it. (Ron's PoV)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1883661/1/Just-A-Word

I liked this, I found it to be an interesting character study of Ron. Which isn't something I thought I'd been interested since I'd largely forgotten that he'd existed. However, the formatting in this really irks me so I'd only give it a 3/5. Though, I do think it is worth reading if just as a mild reminder that there is more to Ron then being the average member of the trio.

 

I liked it. It was an interesting, and refreshing, look into Ron's character. It's nice to see a Ron who is portrayed accurately, like a regular teenager.

I'll give it 4/5. It's not really memorable enough to be worth 5, and lack of length and slightly annoying format count against it.

 

Eh, probably closer to a 2.5/5 for me. It doesn't rely tell us anything we don't know about Ron's character and it was difficult to read because of the injected ().

 

It felt uninspired, like an assignment does, couldn't hold my attention. Nothing new, nothing original in it. 3/5 for not being bad.

 

It's not a bad idea, and if you can get past the chaotic format it's not badly written. But it's essentially one note repeated over and over again, and while it's not something I've seen explicitly stated before, at least in canon, it's hardly a revolutionary idea.

3/5 is about right, I think.

 

I'm kind of ambivalent about this one; it's hard for me to decide whether Ron comes off as realistically pathetic or just plain pathetic. Either way, though, he's pathetic.

That said, it's an interesting character study, but then again, the italicized injections are jarring. They'd pop up in the middle of sentences

(it pissed me off, man!) and they'd also precede line breaks for no discernible reason. Just killed it for me. Fuck it, 3/5.