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WIP Konoha's Legion by Jeconais - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Blaise, Apr 25, 2010.

  1. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Title: Konoha's Legion
    Author: Jeconais
    Rating: M
    Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Drama, Fluff, Humor
    DLP Category: Naruto
    Pairing: It's not slash - I know that much
    Status: 1 chapter, 14k words (because it's Jeconais)
    Summary: After being given some advice from Sakura, Naruto realises that the only way his life is going to improve, is if he does something proactive about it. And so he does, and the Elemental Countries will never be the same again.
    Link: Believe it!

    I don't read Naruto (because seriously...), though I know enough of you have a hard-on for the fandom that I thought this was worth posting. Two main reasons:

    1. Narutards are less prone to raging at fail scenarios - and everything Jeconais has written has been a fail scenario. Everything.

    2. I'm honestly curious about how well he's interpreted the Narutoverse, and the massive word count is enough to whet your appetite between the next update of a more established fic. Whether that time is filled with discussion over a potentially epic novella - or pages of rage-fueld rants against Jeconais - is the million-dollar question.
     
  2. Rehio

    Rehio Bad Dragon ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jesus... I am incredibly disappointed. I thought this would be, you know, somewhat interesting. It's just stupid.
     
  3. Dilla

    Dilla Seventh Year

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    Well, it's a good thing that I'm not a Narutard then, because I see the fail scenario quite clearly. And it's draining my lifeforce.
     
  4. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I'm not sure what is worse: Jeconais naturally writing a shitload of fanon cliches, or Jeconais writing fanon cliches because he intends for it to be humorous. I scanned - and this was incredibly painful. I'll be nice - give it 2/5 stars - because he at least had the grammar down.
     
  5. Bucks

    Bucks Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I'm not so nice, I care very little for grammar if the story is shit. 1/5
     
  6. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    Ridden with cliches and facepalm-moments, but it's Jeconais, so it's at least readable.

    3/5 - wasted my time quite well, and probably belongs in the recycle bin.
     
  7. Captain Trips

    Captain Trips High Inquisitor

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    Shit fic filled with cliches 1/5
     
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