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Complete Light in the Darkest of Times by Black Knight 03 - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Ragon, Feb 24, 2007.

  1. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Title: Light In The Darkest Of Times
    Author: Black Knight 03
    Rating: T
    Genre: General/Romance
    Suggested DLP Category: General
    Pairing: Harry/Bones
    Progress: WIP, now complete -Sesc
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2729307/1/
    Summuary: After fighting for so long and losing so much, Harry is losing himself in the fight. He needs something to find his way or risk never coming back. [HPSB]


    Its not great but its not bad. Its post Hogwarts. After fighting for years. No sidekicks from OotP. They are dead.
    I searched for it but didnt find it. If it was already here please delete the thread.



    PS sorry bout the link. Knew I forgot something just couldnt realize what it was.
     
    Last edited: Feb 24, 2007
  2. Brooklynight

    Brooklynight Seventh Year

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    Where is the link?
     
  3. BioPlague

    BioPlague The Senate DLP Supporter

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  4. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    an average story. 3/5
     
  5. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    Not terrible, so far. The implied Harry/Ginny is annoying, but I can ignore it. The only thing that bothers me is this:
    What the hell is Voldemort doing while the Order are relaxing in their network of hidden caves? Seriously.
    2/5
     
  6. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Seems like just another average romance fic from what I skimmed. First few chapters are pretty bad in my opinion, but the author improves later on.

    The biggest problem for me is that I just can't empathise with this version of Harry.

    2/5
     
  7. Rache

    Rache Headmaster

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    The implied Ginny romance pretty much ruined the beginning for me. The combat scenes were poor and the way Harry is portrayed doesn't appeal to me. Malfoy and Zabini trying to duel to death using stunners and stinging hexes made me laugh.

    Nah, not a story for my tastes. 2/5. The rating is for the pairing.
     
  8. Photon

    Photon Order Member

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    story found at https://forums.darklordpotter.net/neglected.php

    This story have a major problem - start completely failed to interest me in reading more, I started skimming after few paragraphs. Checking random chapters also failed to interest me in any way.

    1/5
     
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