Title: Lords of the Night
Author: pimpilidimpi
Rating: M
Genre: General/Fantasy
Pairing: HP/OC
Status: Work in Progress
Summary: Potters gave Harry to Dursleys to protect him from the war. When Vernon goes too far, someone very unexpected comes to the resque. AU, DarkButNotEvil!Harry, vampires, Super!Harry.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2649475/1/


A take-out from author's profile:

 

Good Story so far! I agree with Xiph0 it truly is a shame that there are only 3 chapters.

 

definately a worthy read

 

post

I think its a great start

 

I like it hope there is soon a new chapter

 

As the others said, this story is worth looking at. There are a few new ideas that I haven't seen before, hopefully it will be continued...

 

I haven't gotten that far into it, but so far, it rocks! I'm gonna go finish it now...

 

there are many good fiction out there that are increadible. but as time goes on they just suck either because they just ruch it over or Cliche's that's enough to give you a headache. but hopefully this fic will be great in the future.

 

The story line is awesome, but to get into it you'll have to look past the immense number of spelling, grammar and wording fuckups. A beta could have done wonders.

 

I really like this story, I usually like stories about how James and Lily give up Harry for strange reasons but this one is better then most.

 

I like it too. I think there is a lot of potential in this story, and if he keeps up this writingstyle, then we will see great things.

 

yeah it is an excellent story but it has only three chapters. i just hope it won't be abandoned.

 

Well this story has been abandoned, and is three chapters long.

I believe however it is written excellently. AbusedHarry! is present at first and it seems Harry is going to be raised by a Vampire Lord. At the time of this fic being written, the idea may/may not had been original but it's not so much original now.

At this point in the story, going by Canon, Harry is four. I thought the concept was interesting, and I would of loved to see more to judge.

I would give it a 3.5/4 based on the content there. It would of easily had gone a 4.5 if not for the grammar, and spelling. However, due to the fact it's abandoned, this story will get a 3/5 in my books. It's not Library worthy with only three chapters, but it is definitely Library worthy at the moment.

 

The urban settings with non-homosexual vampires are still original, in my opinion. It has a much greater immersion value than many other fics.

4/5. I think it's well-written enough to merit staying in the library. If someone got permission to continue this story it would be well worth it.